gham se Rula detey hain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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hum nigahoon se har ik baat bata detey hain
aaina dil ka in aankhon main dikha detey hain

zindagi kia hai zamane ki haqeeqat kia hai
hum to alfaaz main tasweer bana detey hain

koi samjha nahi wunwaan yahaan gham ka mager
ashk aankhoon se jo pardhte hain baha detey hain

dard dariya se bhi gehra hai koi kia jaane
aasnuon main jo hum sahil ko duba detey hain

is qadar sooz hai is zeest ke afsane main
aasmano ko bhi hum gham se rula detey hain

hum wo parwane hain jo jal gaye shama se agar
saath saath apne nasheman bhi jala detey hain

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

wah wah chah gaye ho sir ji :)

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

Nice ghazal DADDU:k:…thanx for sharing with us :slight_smile:

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

hummm

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

dard dariya se bhi gehra hai koi kia jaane
aasnuon main jo hum sahil ko duba detey hain

Wahhh.... Khush rahoo

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

Thank you dostoon.....

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

Wah… Very Beautiful… :slight_smile:

:k: As usual… Daddu Gi

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

**DADDU JEE, Tasleemat, **

aap ka kalaam daikha paRh kar acha laga. . chand ek baateN jo paRhte hove meHsoos hooveN likh rahi hooN. meree aaraa se aap ka ittifaaq zaroori naheiN. :slight_smile:

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Re: gham se Rula detey hain

Zahida Raees jee main katib hoon apne dil main aata hai likh deta hoon jo mehsoos kia wo likh dia ye tum aur doosrey pardhne waalon ke apne apne nazariye ki baat hai meri har ghazal main kuch to kami hogi tum jesey loog jo hain wo he isko behtar kar saktey hain. katib ke hunar ke tashreeh sirf pardhne waala he karta hai. aur tumne koi ghalat nahi kia afreen hai tum per jo meri lakhaai ko behtar nazirye se dekha. aur isko aur bhi behtar karne ki sula di. main bachpan se he likhta aa raha hoon to mera matlab kuch aur mera andaaz kuch aur he hai.
doosra misra jo "main" ki jaga "se" likne main ye faraq hai ke ager smajho to main ye keh raha hoon ke meri aanko main dekho. na ke meri aankhoon se dekho. apne aap ko tarjee de raha hoob.

Anyway Good point.....

aur raha sawaal ke (Ashk Aankhoon se pardhtey hain baha detey hain ) iska tarjuma kuch youn hai. (jo bhi loog mere afsaane ko pardhtey hain wo apni aakhoonse ashq baha detey hain) alfaaz ki hare phair hai .

jo bhi likhta hoon na samjho wohi matlab hoga
meri tehreer agar kuch hai to matlab kuch hai

Thank you.....