Aik Chhoti Si Ghazal,
Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Tum Ne To Mujhe Yaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Dil Sadyon Se Mera Tha, Barbaad Nagar Sa
Tum Ne Isay Aabaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Dunya Ne Hamesha Mujhe Na’Shaad He Rakha
Tum Nay Mujhe Nau’Shaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Alfaaz, Jinhain Sun’nay Ko Sada Kaan Hain Tarsay
Tum Ne Unhain Irshaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
(Ahmer)
Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
wowwwwwwww
its awesone :k:
really very beautiful 
Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
thnx tum bin.. so nice of U :)
Cheegum
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Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
boht khoob! :)
Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
Thnx Cheegam :)
SJ
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its really nevey Amazing…
wonderfuly written…wid blended essence of feelingz…
bohat maza aayaa aj parh k…Dil khush kar diya app nay Ahmer:hugz:
fizatiq
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Beautiful..........
fizatiq
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Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
Aik Chhoti Si Ghazal,
Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Tum Ne To Mujhe Yaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Dil Sadyon Se Mera Tha, Barbaad Nagar Sa
Tum Ne Isay Aabaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Dunya Ne Hamesha Mujhe Na'Shaad He Rakha
Tum Nay Mujhe Nau'Shaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
Alfaaz, Jinhain Sun'nay Ko Sada Kaan Hain Tarsay
Tum Ne Unhain Irshaad Buhat Dair Se Kia
(Ahmer)
Umeed Hai Pasand Aye Gi..
Regards,
Sochta Hoon Tumharay Pass Phir Loat Too Jaoon Mein
Par Kya Ho Gar Tum Nay kush Amdeed phir Buhat Dair Se Kia
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thnx sonia 
shukar aapka dil aaj khush hua.. 
btw kia pehle nahi hota tha 
Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
Thnx fiza 
plus thhnx for the suggested sher as well 
nice try 
fizatiq
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Re: Gham Se Mujhe Aazad Buhat Dair Se Kia..
app hi loogon say inspire ho kar kuch mein bhi likh datee hoon warna shaeryi maree bas ki kahan…
fiza