GHAM-E-KHAYAAT MAIN TUJH KO BHULA DIYA MAIN NEYAAD-E-EHAD-E-RAFTA KO JHALA DIYA MAIN NE
JANTA HOON KE TERA NASEEB MAIN NAHINNAKAAM AARZUON KO RO RO KE SULA DIYA MAIN NE
TEREY JANEY PE EK MAIN HI NA ROYA THAAPNEY SATH AASMAN KO BHI RULA DIYA MAIN NE
IIS SE BARH KAR KYA HO GI WUSSAT-E-DEEDZAMEEN KO AASMAN SE MILA DIYA MAIN NE
KAROBAAR-E-HASTI MAIN GHUM HO GAI TERI AARZOO BHIKAISA AJEEB MUHABBAT KA SILA DIYA MAIN NE
KUCH TO ASAR THA MERI SADA MAINJO BEJAAN PATHRON KO HILA DIYA MAIN NE
DAAG SAMJOON YA TERI BAKHSHI HUI SOGAATAPNEY ZAHMON KO CHAT KAR SEHLA DIYA MAIN NE
KHUD APNA HI JIGAR CHHALNI KAR GIYA ASEERWOH TEER JO ANDHEREY MAIN CHALA DIYA MAIN NE
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Apni ghazal pe aap k comments paRh kar jaane kya kya sochta hua yahaaN aaya tha par......disappointed. Well janab, khush rahiye. Ham ne Moderator Sahab ki islaah karne ki koshish kar lene k baad, ab kisi ko bhi koi suggestion dena cHoR dia hai. Agar sab utopia of art mein khush hain to phir khush hi rahein.
JANAB HAMARA MATLAB AAP KO MAYOOS KAR HER GIZ NAHIN HAI. MAZEED MEHNAT KE BAREY MAIN SIRF IIS LIYE LIKHA THA KEH MAZEED KOSHISH KAREIN GE TO SHAIRI MAIN MAZEED NIKHAAR AAYE GA. AAP APNEY TOR JAISI BHI ISLAAH KAR SAKTEY HAIN ZAROOR KIJIYE AUR APNI RAYE BHI DIJIYE KEH AAP KA HAQ HAI.
JANAB HAMARA MATLAB AAP KO MAYOOS KAR HER GIZ NAHIN HAI. MAZEED MEHNAT KE BAREY MAIN SIRF IIS LIYE LIKHA THA KEH MAZEED KOSHISH KAREIN GE TO SHAIRI MAIN MAZEED NIKHAAR AAYE GA. AAP APNEY TOR JAISI BHI ISLAAH KAR SAKTEY HAIN ZAROOR KIJIYE AUR APNI RAYE BHI DIJIYE KEH AAP KA HAQ HAI.