GHAM-E-KHAYAAT

GHAM-E-KHAYAAT MAIN TUJH KO BHULA DIYA MAIN NE
YAAD-E-EHAD-E-RAFTA KO JHALA DIYA MAIN NE

JANTA HOON KE TERA NASEEB MAIN NAHIN
NAKAAM AARZUON KO RO RO KE SULA DIYA MAIN NE

TEREY JANEY PE EK MAIN HI NA ROYA THA
APNEY SATH AASMAN KO BHI RULA DIYA MAIN NE

IIS SE BARH KAR KYA HO GI WUSSAT-E-DEED
ZAMEEN KO AASMAN SE MILA DIYA MAIN NE

KAROBAAR-E-HASTI MAIN GHUM HO GAI TERI AARZOO BHI
KAISA AJEEB MUHABBAT KA SILA DIYA MAIN NE

KUCH TO ASAR THA MERI SADA MAIN
JO BEJAAN PATHRON KO HILA DIYA MAIN NE

DAAG SAMJOON YA TERI BAKHSHI HUI SOGAAT
APNEY ZAHMON KO CHAT KAR SEHLA DIYA MAIN NE

KHUD APNA HI JIGAR CHHALNI KAR GIYA ASEER
WOH TEER JO ANDHEREY MAIN CHALA DIYA MAIN NE

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*IIS SE BARH KAR KYA HO GI WUSSAT-E-DEED
ZAMEEN KO AASMAN SE MILA DIYA MAIN NE *


buhat he allaaaa nicee haan

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Good one!

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Apni ghazal pe aap k comments paRh kar jaane kya kya sochta hua yahaaN aaya tha par......disappointed.
Well janab, khush rahiye. Ham ne Moderator Sahab ki islaah karne ki koshish kar lene k baad, ab kisi ko bhi koi suggestion dena cHoR dia hai.
Agar sab utopia of art mein khush hain to phir khush hi rahein.

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JANAB HAMARA MATLAB AAP KO MAYOOS KAR HER GIZ NAHIN HAI. MAZEED MEHNAT KE BAREY MAIN SIRF IIS LIYE LIKHA THA KEH MAZEED KOSHISH KAREIN GE TO SHAIRI MAIN MAZEED NIKHAAR AAYE GA. AAP APNEY TOR JAISI BHI ISLAAH KAR SAKTEY HAIN ZAROOR KIJIYE AUR APNI RAYE BHI DIJIYE KEH AAP KA HAQ HAI.

UMEED HAI KEH AB AAP KI TASHAFFI HUI HO GI.

SHUKRIA
A.A. ASEER

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JANAB HAMARA MATLAB AAP KO MAYOOS KAR HER GIZ NAHIN HAI. MAZEED MEHNAT KE BAREY MAIN SIRF IIS LIYE LIKHA THA KEH MAZEED KOSHISH KAREIN GE TO SHAIRI MAIN MAZEED NIKHAAR AAYE GA. AAP APNEY TOR JAISI BHI ISLAAH KAR SAKTEY HAIN ZAROOR KIJIYE AUR APNI RAYE BHI DIJIYE KEH AAP KA HAQ HAI.

UMEED HAI KEH AB AAP KI TASHAFFI HUI HO GI.

SHUKRIA
A.A. ASEER

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very nice .......................... thanks you :)