Gham-e-aashiqui sey keh dou

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 2:50pm 1

Gham-e-aashiqui sey keh dou raah-e-aam tak naa pauhnchey
mujhey khouf hai yeh touhmat meray naam tak naa pauhnchey

meiN nazar sey pii raha thaa tou yeh dil ney bad-duaa di
teraa haath zindagi bhar kabhi jaam tak naa pauhnchey

naii subah par nazar hai magar aah yeh bhi dar hai
yeh sahar bhi rafta rafta kahiN shaam tak naa pauhnchey

woh navaa-e-muzamahil kiyaa naa hou jis meiN dil ki dhaRkan
woh sadaa-e-ahl-e-dil kiyaa jou awaam tak naa pauhnchey

unheiN apney dil ki khabreiN meray dil sey mil rahi heiN
meiN jou unn sey rooth jaauN tou payaam tak naa pauhnchey

yeh adaa-e-beniaazi tujhey bewafaa mubaarak
magar aisi berukhi kiyaa key salaam tak naa pauhnchey

jou naqaab-e-rukh uthaa di tou yeh qaid bhi lagaa di
uthey har nigaah lekin koi baam tak naa pauhnchey

wohi ik khamosh naghma hai shakeel jaan-e-hasti
jou zubaaN tak naa aaye jou kalaam tak naa pauhnchey

(Shakeel Badayuni)

tarash December 7, 2013, 4:10pm 2

Re: Gham-e-aashiqui sey keh dou

unheiN apney dil ki khabreiN meray dil sey mil rahi heiN
meiN jou unn sey rooth jaauN tou payaam tak naa pauhnchey

aap ka dil un ka jasoos

KKF December 7, 2013, 4:18pm 3

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beautiful Ghazal...is Ghazal ko kuchh taraameem ke saath ek Bollywood movie meN bhii iste'maal kiyaa gayaa thaa.

bahot achchhii Ghazal paRhvaaii aapne...shukria. :)

muqawwee123 December 7, 2013, 4:25pm 4

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jou naqaab-e-rukh uthaa di tou yeh qaid bhi lagaa di
uthey har nigaah lekin koi baam tak naa pauhnchey

Parde main rehne do, parda na uthao ;)

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 4:26pm 5

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thanks.....

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 4:28pm 6

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that was burqey mein rehney do ;)

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 4:29pm 7

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hamare jasoos kone kone mein phailey huey hein

muqawwee123 December 7, 2013, 4:30pm 8

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correction noted

KKF December 7, 2013, 4:32pm 9

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ya’nii:**

do jaasoos kareN maHsoos k dunyaa baRii Kharaab hai
zaraa socho, zaraa samjho, zaraa sambhal ke rahiyo, jii!**

KKF December 7, 2013, 4:33pm 10

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mash'hoor gaane men to lafz "Burq'e" to nahiiN thaa..."parde" hii thaa! :)

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 4:36pm 11

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yes original version mein parda thaa but aik original se ziada achcha version bhi hai uss mein pardey ko burqey se replace kiyaa gaya.....

KKF December 7, 2013, 4:38pm 12

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achchhaa...to kia kisii mulla ne likhaa thaa vo gaanaa? :D

tarash December 7, 2013, 4:40pm 13

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haan woh apny aap ko sab mullaon se bara samajhta hai

KKF December 7, 2013, 4:41pm 14

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kia ‘Bhai’ kii baat kar rahe haiN?

KKF December 7, 2013, 4:49pm 15

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can you please recheck this she'r because there seems to be a problem.

qawaafii ke Hisaab se to lafz "qalam" ko "kalaam" honaa chaahiye magar ma'nvii ai'tabaar se "zabaan se qalam" tak ziyaada mauzooN hai.

magar

qawaafii [baam, salaam, shaam, naam, 'aam etc] kii roo se qaafiya "kalaam" hii saHeeH hogaa magar isse ma'nii meN Khalal paRtaa hai.

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 6:30pm 16

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yes its kalaam, typing error :D

ehsan December 7, 2013, 7:03pm 17

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Very hee nice. :k:

hybridkamal December 7, 2013, 7:16pm 18

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thanks ehsan uncle…

enter10 December 7, 2013, 7:35pm 19

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:k: