ghalib ki zameen main aik shaer

well i am working on this ghazal in ghalib’s zameen … not quite done yet…

here is a shaer in its unrefined form…

nou amooz-e-ishq, hathyaar bhi kund, aur umer-e-nou khaiz
hamaary dil pay mashq-e-sitam uss nain ki, baa hunar honay tak

Re: ghalib ki zameen main aik shaer

very nice.

Re: ghalib ki zameen main aik shaer

Qabza gruop ky lagty ho :snooty:

Re: ghalib ki zameen main aik shaer

:rotfl:
shukriyaa

dushwari aunty thanx