**salaam dosto,
ummeed hai k mizaaj-e-giraamii ba_Khair hoNge.
kuchh 'arsa qabl, BLESSED-206 ne ek laRii ba-‘unvaan “KKF kii signature kaa challenge” kaa aaGhaaz kiyaa thaa. aaj kaafii ta’attul ke ba’d maiN jawaab likh paayaa jise maiN aap logoN ke hamraah share kar rahaa huN. ummeed hai k aapkii taba’-e-naazuk pe baar-e-giraaN na hogaa…shukria 
mulaaHizah farmaaiye:
awwalan, maiN taaKheer ke liye a teh-e-dil ma’aaZarat_Khowaah huuN. ba_qaul-e-Ghaib:
huii taaKheer to kuchh baa’is-e-taakheer bhii thaa
ham to aate hii the magar koii 'onaaN_geer bhii thaa!
aur vo sabab thaa is she’r kii kuchh tikniki pahluuoN par Gahur o Khaus aur kuchh taHqeeqaat ba_Hawaala-e-qufl-e-abjad. Khair, to ab aate haiNGhalib ke is she’r kii taraf:
tujh se qismat meN mirii soorat-e-qufl-e-abjad
thaa likhaa baat ke bante hii judaa ho jaanaa**
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qufl-e-abjab vo qufl hote haiN jo aadaa kii madad se kholaa aur band kiyaa jaataa hai. Ghalib ne lafz “judaa” farmaayaa hai jaise do insaan ba nafs-e-nefees judaa hote haiN. merii taHqeeq se yeh baat vaa huii hai k daur-e-maazii meN is qufl kii saaKht kuchh yuuN hotii thii k iske do Hisse hote the…ek to vo Hissa jis meN kal purze hote the aur dusra vo Hissa jo mahraab kii shakl kaa hotaa thaa [jise ham kunDaa kahte han] jo qulaabe meN se ho kar QUFL-BAND thaa aur aadaa kii tarteeb se jab taalaa khultaa to vo kal purze waalaa Hissa dhaR se zamiiN-bos ho jaataa agar vo dusre haath kii girift meN na aa paataa. is taraH taalaa ba-zaat-e-Khud apne kunDe se aur qulaabe se judaa ho jaataa…isii liye farmaayaa “judaa” ho jaanaa.
ab aate haiN is she’r kii Khoobii kii taraf jo iskii tikniki Khoobi bhi hai…yaa, yuN kah leN k is she’r kii Khoobii iske Husn e bayaan meN hai. yeh tiknik Ghalib kaa hii Khaassa hai aur unke yahaN yeh bahot kasrat se paayaa jaataa hai. is tiknik ko ham lafzii ta’attul ke naam se jaante haiN. yeh she’r mulaaHizah farmaaiye:
ghiste ghiste miT jaataa aapne 'abas badlaa
nang-e-sajda se mire sang-e-aastaaN apnaa
is she’r meN punctuation be-intihaa ahmiyat kaa Haamil hai jo is she’r kaa saHeeH mafhoom aKhaz karne ke liye aur uskii tafheem ke liye ashadd zaroorii hai…so, ab dekhiiye:
ghiste ghiste miT jaataa, aapne 'abas badla
nang-e-sajdah se mire, sang-e-aastaaN apnaa
Ghalib maahir the aise ash’aar kahne meN aur meri daanist meN to koi aisa duusraa shaa’ir nahiiN jis ne aisii tarkeeb-o-tarteeb-e-bayaan musta’mil kii ho.
ab aaiye us tarkeeb aur tarteeb e bayaan kii taraf:
is she’r ke 4 Hisse haiN:
- ghiste ghiste miT jaataa
- aapne 'abas badlaa
- nang-e-sajda se mire
- sang-e-aastaaN apnaa
is she’r ko agar saade alfaaz meN vaaze’ kiyaa jaaye to hameN 3 aur 1 ko milaa kar paRhnaa paRegaa aur isii taraH 2 aur 4 ko…dekhiye ab kia soorat nikaltii hai:
ghiste ghiste miT jaataa nang-e-sajda se mire
aapne 'abas badla sang-e-aastaaN apnaa
ab manaind-e-sheesha huaa na saaf yeh she’r?
aisii zaroorat-e-tarteeb_o_tarkeeb-e-bayaan ba_sabab-e-tangii-e-radeef_o_qaafiya vujuud meN aatii hai.
to ab agar Ghalib ke mazkoorah she’r ke bhii Hisse kiye jaayeN to yeh soorat-e-bayaan nazar aayegii. is she’r ke hameN 6 Hisse karne hoNge:
tujh se qismat meN mirii soorat-e-qufl-e-abjad
thaa likhaa baat ke bante hii judaa ho jaanaa
ab is she’r kii agar ham saHeeH tareeqe se punctuation kareN to kuchh aisii hogii:
tujh se, qismat meN merii, soorat-e-qufl-e-abjad
thaa likhaa, baat ke bante hii, judaa ho jaanaa
ab iske Hisse par nazar-e-saanii kijiiye:
- tujh se
- qismat meN mirii
- soorat-e-qufl-e-abjad
- thaa likhaa
- baat ke bante hii
- judaa ho jaanaa
ab agar ham in ke joRe banaayeN to is tarteeb se karnii hogii
5 aur 3
2 aur 4
1 aur 6
ise ab yuN likkheN:
- baat ke bante hii soorat-e-quf-e-abjad
- qismat meN mirii likhaa thaa
- tujh se judaa ho jaanaa**
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yanii, baat ke bante hii misl-e-qufl-e-abjad qismat meN mirii likkhaa thaa tujh se judaa ho jaanaa!**
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ab huii baat vaazeH?
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vese mere zahan mi kia tha phir bataon gi:rotfl:
per aik aiteraz hai k aik talay k sath chabi b lagi hui hai,agar aise he laga dia tu phir taale ka kya faida :hinna: