Barfilay makaaN Main
yakh basta MakeeN
San’jh dhalay
Mourat e kan’ch lagay
Pass e aayna .. Tt’handi aah bharay
Jari kuch dair ko …
Yeh khail rahay
D’hund ke paar, D’hund-lahat
Eik naam ki aanch sahay
Sisski bharay .. oor kuch na kahay
Munjamid, uss pal main rahay
Barfilay makaaN Ka … Yakh basta makeeN
Adab
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
nice poem, Azad. too much frozen ness though. which is all good.
best,
Dushwari
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
nice poem, Azad. too much frozen ness though. which is all good. best, Dushwari
Eik naam ki aanch sahay
Eik naam ki aanch ka diya hay na ... kafi hay
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
Nahi,
aik unkahey lafz ka metleb hey,
her-chund, adhoora tow hey.
poora tow nahi!
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
pori zaat sirf Pakiza o Bar'tar ki hay. ma'sewa, kisi faa'ni cheez ka hona na hona koi ma'ani nahi rakhta.
adab
Re: ghair marouf logon ki “Re: inspired by AQ 's december” ki thandak se matasir ho
@ title
very nice Azad :k:
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
taufeek kee barkat motabaer hasti-e-insan ko hee milee thee, gir ker.
Iblees ko nahi.
Isi aik Raa'b-izzet kee inayet hey.
Azad ko keisey miss ker diya? Mubaligaen, koe ba-maani tabeer ho gee, Raab kee zaat kee jo aisey hey hova.
faani honeye meye koe urz nahi.
stechi aur kharee lasaniyet bohet see dunya key afkaar aur zindagi ko jeeney kee hunr mendee kee mushk key fakoon sey betcha deitee hey.
Best,
Dushwari
pori zaat sirf Pakiza o Bar'tar ki hay. ma'sewa, kisi faa'ni cheez ka hona na hona koi ma'ani nahi rakhta.
adab
Re: ghair marouf logon ki “Re: inspired by AQ 's december” ki thandak se matasir ho
nice
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
Anwar bahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
Barfilay makaaN Main yakh basta MakeeN San'jh dhalay Mourat e kan'ch lagay Pass e aayna .. Tt'handi aah bharay Jari kuch dair ko ..... Yeh khail rahay D'hund ke paar, D'hund-lahat ** Eik naam ki aanch sahay** ** Sisski bharay .. oor kuch na kahay Munjamid, uss pal main rahay Barfilay makaaN Ka .... Yakh basta makeeN
** Adab
Hmm, dil ki baat kehdi aap nay tu! Buhat achay...
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
hummm 'yahi to mera kamal fun hay'
aray bhai be'tuki nazum hi to hay ... khair aghar yakh basta makeenoN ko 'Thandak' or dil ke basiyon ko 'dil ki baat' mehsoos ho rahi hay to iss ka matlub hay keh hum bhi tukbandi ke qabil ho gay hain. theek??
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
Anwar bahiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!
hummm lagta hay iss ke qafiya radeef gum ho gay hain jo bhai ko ro rahi hay.
Re: ghair marouf logon ki “Re: inspired by AQ 's december” ki thandak se matasir ho
adab
Re: ghair marouf logon ki “Re: inspired by AQ 's december” ki thandak se matasir ho
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
filhal mush is thread main baraf baraf sun ker sardee lag rahee hay : )
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
Yaar abhi itni thand nahi howee jitni aap ke post ko phar kar hoo rahee hai..
Kabhi kabhi lakhnay lagay hoo.. Khariyat tu hai na ya ka jahan aap hoo wahan sardi bohat hai...
Re: ghair marouf logon ki “Re: inspired by AQ 's december” ki thandak se matasir ho
Adab, kaisay mizaj hain??
Ajj Azad hone ka matlab khoob samjah main aaya
Jab ek hath bandook aur doosri main khanjar paya:cb:
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
sub ka shukriya
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
:AID:
Re: ghair marouf logon ki "Re: inspired by AQ 's december" ki thandak se matasir ho
hummm