Amal
August 16, 2007, 12:58pm
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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…
Ghaam Ki Taptee Agg Mein Jal Kay Apni Zaat Mukamal Ho
Aisaa bhee kya hoo saktaa hai tum bhee kitnaay pagal ho
Shanay say sarak k ye anchal taree sookhee pay lehrata hai
Jab shaam kay kandhay pay bhi koi surmae rang ka badal ho
Hamdarde say koi bolay tu ansoo’n tu chalak he jatay hain
Jab maslay kuch kuch nazuk hon dil baray ghum say bojhal ho
Aa samjhota kar lain hum,ek dojay mein khud ko zum kar lain
Mein taree rooh ka soz banon tu meray dard mein shamil ho
Mein tujh ko soochtee rahtee hon iss jaa’n leeva tanhaee mein
Jab bahir sab kuch saakit ho aur dil kay under hulchul ho
Mujh mein bhi khahish hai piha’n mera bhi hai ye khaab hasee’n
Mujh say bhi koi pyaar karay,koi maree zaat ka saail ho
Chal tujh ko mein samjhate hon tu mujh mein dehakta hai aisay
Mare zaat mein phaila jaisay koi agg mein jalta jungle ho
Aisay mein qismat say akhir chahat ki laraee kon laray
Jab dil k lashkar mein shamil har khahish ka tun gha’il ho
Do tell me friendz k app ko kaisee lagee ye ghazal…Critisism is accepted …so if u think k mein kuch behtar kar saktee hon tu plz zaroor batayee ga…
“Khuda karey ho zor-e-qalm aur ziaada…” Well, ab hum kya kaheiN, sab ney itn akuch to keh dia…bohat zabardast ghazal hey soniaa_jee k: Hamaarey saath share karne ke leeye shukriya