Ghaam ki Taptee Agg............

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Ghaam Ki Taptee Agg Mein Jal Kay Apni Zaat Mukamal Ho
Aisaa bhee kya hoo saktaa hai tum bhee kitnaay pagal ho

Shanay say sarak k ye anchal taree sookhee pay lehrata hai
Jab shaam kay kandhay pay bhi koi surmae rang ka badal ho

Hamdarde say koi bolay tu ansoo’n tu chalak he jatay hain
Jab maslay kuch kuch nazuk hon dil baray ghum say bojhal ho

Aa samjhota kar lain hum,ek dojay mein khud ko zum kar lain
Mein taree rooh ka soz banon tu meray dard mein shamil ho

Mein tujh ko soochtee rahtee hon iss jaa’n leeva tanhaee mein
Jab bahir sab kuch saakit ho aur dil kay under hulchul ho

Mujh mein bhi khahish hai piha’n mera bhi hai ye khaab hasee’n
Mujh say bhi koi pyaar karay,koi maree zaat ka saail ho

Chal tujh ko mein samjhate hon tu mujh mein dehakta hai aisay
Mare zaat mein phaila jaisay koi agg mein jalta jungle ho

Aisay mein qismat say akhir chahat ki laraee kon laray
Jab dil k lashkar mein shamil har khahish ka tun gha’il ho

Do tell me friendz k app ko kaisee lagee ye ghazal…Critisism is accepted …so if u think k mein kuch behtar kar saktee hon tu plz zaroor batayee ga…:slight_smile:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

wow

lobly

nice sharing sonai baji :hugz:

I want to flirt with........
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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

thanks Dear…:bb:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

:eek:

OMG you are chuprustam :hmmm:

very nice :k:

keep up the good work :flower1:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

nahin shabbo …i m nt into ghazals na.thats y i was scared k pata nahin pasand ayy ya na aay…:slight_smile:
thanks for appreciation…:bb:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

ye do ashaar i like the most :lajawab:

overall nice ghazal :k:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

thanks aloy deep jee…:slight_smile:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg............

Beautiful.. SImply Awesome.. :)

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg............

awwwwwwwwwwwww ap bhe lekhte ho v nice sis :)

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg............

Jee Behan Jee Kabhi kabhi likh he laytee hon...............:)

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

Behtree ke gunjaish to hamaisha he rehtee hai :slight_smile:

mujhay umeed to nahi thee but acha he likh lia hai :naraz: …

Good Job !!!:hoonh:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

ab often lekha kero ap ke urdu boht ache he me ke tarah nehe
bangladesh :naraz:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

:cb:…u r sweet..
Wel tum ana kabhi meray pass tumharee class lon ge(urdu ki):smiley:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

i think u hav always… .under-estimated me sis…:smiley:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg............

hummm

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

mainay bhi tareef kia thee.. :naraz:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

Awww…tum tu apnay he ho…tumhain kya thanks kaho…
chalo kah daytee hon…Ahmer tum hamesha mujhay back up kartay rahay ho jab say mein Gs par sharing kar rahee hon…u always hav encouraged me alot…
i m really thankful to u …for all ur kind support…:slight_smile:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

me ne bhe taref ke the :smilestar:

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg............

agay jo likha tha kuch zada he hogaya.. matlab.. U have always shared master pieces.. to appreciate kerna was on merit.. so please jo part mainay del ker dia aap bhi edit ker do :$

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Re: Ghaam ki Taptee Agg…

tum apni teacher ko maar rahee ho…:femmefatale: