Gaye dinooN pe nazar dalo to

Gaye dinooN pe nazar dalo to
gard-e-malal mein liptey mah-o-saal rait ki ma’anind aankh mein chubhtey haiN
rooz-o-shab ki musafat faqat kaar-e-zeyaaN
nakamiyooN ko shakast dainey meiN faqat nakami hath aati he
**kyooN our kooN ki ghunjlak ghuthi ko suljhaney meiN **
neemjaaN hoye jatey haiN
**zehar-rasa aaghi sey neeley parhtey badan ko herangi sey taktey **
dard key bhanparh mein jaltey hain
**qismat ki loh pe likhi lahasli ki shehsurkhi **
apni jalti aankhooN sey parhtey hain
hath ki uljhi lakeerooN ko yooN taktey hain, jaisey
zindgi ka lamha-e-khush aaind
yeheeN inki bujhi hatheli pe chamkey ga…

-Rameesha

Re: Gaye dinooN pe nazar dalo to

thorri dair main phir se pharrain ge

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Mashallah… Very Nice… :flower1:

Re: Gaye dinooN pe nazar dalo to

Rameesha ji, be’had khoobsoorat tehreer hey. Is qadar pukhtagi hey aap ki likhaai meiN. Yaqeenan aek mumkammal nazm hey ye. I still remember aap sey aek baar kaha tha ke aati jaati raha kareiN, we need seniors like you. Yaad hey? Wo isi leeye kaha tha ke I knew ke aap meiN baat hey :slight_smile: Thanx a lot for sharing this masterpiece with us :slight_smile:

Re: Gaye dinooN pe nazar dalo to

Aap to chupee rustam nikleeN Rameesha! Waqaee hi muqammal nazm hai :slight_smile:

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nazm parhney our pasand karney behad shukria Golden Scorpion our KhamoshNigahein:flower1:

Amal ji kehtey hain, kissi cheez ka husn jo hota he woh dekhney wali aankh mein hota he, aap ko nazm achhi lagi to yaqeenan is mein bhi kochh nah kochh aisi baat zaroor hogi :-)… khair baat jo bhi ho aap kay ilfaaz mery liye kissi ezaaz say kam naheen..thankoo :flower1: