Gayan ka lamha

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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sukh ka saya dukh ki dhoop
jo ik jagha milai mera naqsh ubher aya
jo khoya jo paya sab yad aya
sukh ka saya dukh ki dhoop
jo ik jagha milai mera naqsh ubher aya

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Re: Gayan ka lamha

hmmm

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Re: Gayan ka lamha

Ab tu sach kahon kisi ki apni ghazal nazm ya lines bhi hon tu tareef krty hoy dar lagta hy ky kahin kis or ki shairi post kr ky bywaquf na bna raha ho:(
***Agar apni shairi hy tu buhat achy :k: ***
Snnan or Zamil btayiy kahin or tu nahi parhi:smiley:

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Re: Gayan ka lamha

aawww GN yeh toh zulm hua na shashak per......he/she is new...!!!!
Abhi toh na darain bachay/bachi ko.........!!!!!

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Re: Gayan ka lamha

Drany ki bat tu os ky liy hy agar kis or ka klam hy tu otherwise no way to be afrid of:desimunda:

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Re: Gayan ka lamha

Thank you guys for appreciation. Well 'goodnews' I understand your point of view and it is my own poetry otherwise I know very well where to add the other 'shoras' poetry. I do welcome your critism and thanks for support 'Muslim girl'.

Last person to answer this post wins!!!!
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Re: Gayan ka lamha

Very nice