Dania
1
***GALTI MERI THI”
Usne mujhe chaha hi nahi’
main chahat samajh bethi
uski pal bhar ki muskurahat ko
pyaar samajh bethi…
woh tou har baat par
haan karta thaa…
usne mujh se ziyadah
ahmiyat di meray dostoN ko
main uski yeh ada
mazak samajh bethi..
galti meri hi thee…
Usne kaha bhi tha
koi or hai meri zindagi mE
Main hi khud ko uski
zindagi samajh baithi
galti meri hi the…***
ehsan
2
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
Ghalti toh phir aap kee hee howee. 
nice. :k:
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
yee tou hai Ghalti toh phir aap heee kee hee howee. :D
WiseGuy
7
Nice
Aakhir kabtak ghalation ka silsila chalay ga?
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
galtiii merii hiii thiiiiiiiiii NICE :k:
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
bohat he peeeerhi ghalti thi :p, kafi baywazan shairi hai.......pehlay mohabbat kar k ghalti ki phir yeh nazam likh k :p
UZ
12
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
Itni bari ghalti kyoon ki :D
Dania
13
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
pata nahi kab tak..
good to see u ..welcome back 
sajo kaisi ho?
bass jee hogayee..ab kya karain? 
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
Dania, kia yeh poem aap ne khud likhi hai?
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
@Dania
what about my comments? itni bay wazan shairi wali baat ka ???? :) tanqeed ka tu jawab day dena tha jab k woo sahe bhi hai :P,
Re: Galti Meri Thee..
acha muqalma hai shairi numa :hinna: