Galti Meri Thee..

***GALTI MERI THI”
Usne mujhe chaha hi nahi’
main chahat samajh bethi

uski pal bhar ki muskurahat ko
pyaar samajh bethi…

woh tou har baat par
haan karta thaa…

usne mujh se ziyadah
ahmiyat di meray dostoN ko

main uski yeh ada
mazak samajh bethi..

galti meri hi thee…

Usne kaha bhi tha
koi or hai meri zindagi mE

Main hi khud ko uski
zindagi samajh baithi

galti meri hi the…***

Re: Galti Meri Thee..

Ghalti toh phir aap kee hee howee. :smiley:

nice. :k:

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yee tou hai Ghalti toh phir aap heee kee hee howee. :D

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Itni badi ghalati?

:k: nice sharing.

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Galti kyun ki apne :mad:

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:nahi:

Nice
Aakhir kabtak ghalation ka silsila chalay ga?

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Nice.

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galtiii merii hiii thiiiiiiiiii NICE :k:

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:rotfl: @ all the comments

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bohat he peeeerhi ghalti thi :p, kafi baywazan shairi hai.......pehlay mohabbat kar k ghalti ki phir yeh nazam likh k :p

Re: Galti Meri Thee..

Itni bari ghalti kyoon ki :D

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:cb: pata nahi kab tak..:stuck_out_tongue:
good to see u ..welcome back :slight_smile:

sajo kaisi ho?

bass jee hogayee..ab kya karain? :smiley:

Re: Galti Meri Thee..

Dania, kia yeh poem aap ne khud likhi hai?

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@Dania

what about my comments? itni bay wazan shairi wali baat ka ???? :) tanqeed ka tu jawab day dena tha jab k woo sahe bhi hai :P,

Re: Galti Meri Thee..

acha muqalma hai shairi numa :hinna: