GajroN kaliouN ke mausam meiN

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Nai GHazal lekar Haaazir hooN

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.apni Raaye se nawaaziyega jazakallah

<(EDIT)> Iss Ghazal ke Maqtaa meiN Shaakir ke “ir” ki wajah se LagHzish hai ..chuNache Ustaad-e-Mohtaram ki raaye ke baad mujehy Maqtaa ki islaah keliye Shakir ki bajye Tassneef ka istemaal karna aprh raha hai aap Maqtaa ko iss tarah parhiyega

** Mere Soone Aangan meiN Tassneef meri parcHaiN hai
Kiss ki Bhooli Soch ka paaoUN aisse meiN Dar aata hai ** jazzakallah
aap bhi aapni raaye see nawaaziyegaa shukria

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

[This message has been edited by Tassneef (edited June 29, 2002).]

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wah wah Buhat hi Beautiful isse Parhne ke liye humain Dic ki need nahin hua :stuck_out_tongue:
good work

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Thanx

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dic ki need nahi hui magar Grammer ki to hui hogi na maunas muzakar dekhne ke lyie

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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nope usska bhi no need humari urdu jaese bhi hai kaafi batter hai some ppl se:-P

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NahiN mazzaq aik taraf ab such to yeh keh, sab se abrhi baat keh Aap Urdu bolti haiN aur aapko urdu se behad Piyaar hai ..aur yahi aap ki Azmat hai

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kissi gHair zubaan ko bolne ki bajaye aap urdu bolna passand karti haiN ..iss cheez ki maiN qaddar karta hoooN

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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HMmm main neh to yeh post dekhee hi nahin thee

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Hmmmmmmmmmmm Tasneef jee…Bohot khoob

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Hum neh to apni kitaab main likh lee hai …Lekin sorry hum neh to aap seh pocha hi nahin…Ijaazat hai ???

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heheehe naiki aur PoocH poocH..mujhey aur keya chahiyee , agar meri Koi adna si gHazal aik Haseena ki haseen si Dairy meiN Phool ki Maanind uski Zeenat ka samaan kare!! yeh to ghar Shaiyar ka kHawaab hotaa hai, aur aap mujh se kiouN pocoH rahi haiN…gHazal ka Muqaam yaqeenan aap ki Diary hi hai aur agar aap meri gHazal ko itnaa pasand karti haiN aur yeh muqaam deti haiN to ye aap ka kHuloos hai Nayaab aur maiN isske jawaab meiN “Shukriaa” hi keh saktaa hooN

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Ik Sher guzraa hai gumaan se suniyega

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Tere hi dam se hai Nayaab sab Kamal-e-SukHan
So yeh Asaaasa tere Naam kar bhi saktaa hooN
Maqsad yeh hai keh Poet to likh deta hai magar aap jaisse Qadar-Daan hi haiN jo Uske Kalaam meiN Taazgi aur Dilkashi mehsoos karte hai , bilkul ussi tarah, jaisse agar PhooloN per Titliaan , BhaNware aur Shehad ki makhiaaN na matwajoh hooN to Phool bhi apni kHushboo aur dilkashi kho dey.

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Phool se ziadaa uske Hussan meiN haath, Naseem, Bhanware, aur Titlion ka hota hai to meri yeh GhazleiN aur Ashaar aap ki tawajoh ki wajah se hi mehakte huwe Phool bane haiN

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Jazakallah

**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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Thanks jee…

Aur aap ko dekh kar bohot khushi hohee…

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Thanx

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)kiouN maiN koi kHoord-been(teleskop) se dikhne waali cheez hoon

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lolz

NahiN maiN gaiyaa hi nahiN thaa..saari raat soiyaaa nahiN thaa..iss lyie next weekend per dekha jaaiga Inshallah

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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Aghar aap ghay hi nahin to aap yaha Gupshup main kion nahin thay …

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Aur sarhee raat aap so kion nahin sakhay..kheriyat to thee na

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Raat ko soiya nahi tha na (internet ki wajah se) issi wajah se gaiyaa nahin tha keh Din ko neend aagai thi

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aur issi wajah se GS per nahin tha keh maiN to so raha tha ..hahaha

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koi baat nahiN next week inshallah

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agar Zindagi rahi to !!!

**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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[This message has been edited by Shaam-e-Firaq (edited June 30, 2002).]

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Tassneef:
** Raat ko soiya nahi tha na (internet ki wajah se) issi wajah se gaiyaa nahin tha keh Din ko neend aagai thi

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aur issi wajah se GS per nahin tha keh maiN to so raha tha ..hahaha

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koi baat nahiN next week inshallah

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agar Zindagi rahi to !!!

Yeh kia baat hohee…Internett keh aghay itna kion bethte hai keh aap so hi nahin pahay raat ko..achee baat nahin hotee…isseh inshaan ki tabhiyat kharaab hoti hai …Ainda aap neh khyaal rakhna hai
Nahin to yeh dost naraaz ho jahay ghee

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yeh leh hum neh baand kar dee..lekin hum to aap ko apna dost samajh ke keh rehe thay keh apna khyaal rakhna chahiye na…Internett seh ziada apni sehaat ka khyaal rakhay…
Aur wese humare dost ko yeh koun mil ghay hai ..jo aj kal woh raat ko sarha din internett seh nahin uttay…

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[This message has been edited by Nayab (edited June 30, 2002).]

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[quote]
Originally posted by Nayab:
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acHa babaa achaa lolz aindaa khaiyaal rakhooNga, magar yeh Hathorhe maarna to band karo..meraa sar pHat jaaigaa lolzz..ainda so jaouNga ok

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Ab theek hai

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hahahahahaa
mujeh be ikHtiyaar hansi aagaai
aap ne "ab theek hai " aisse kahaa aur mujehy aisse laggaa
jaisse kissi insaan ka hashar kardene ke baad qeema banaa dene ke baad sukh ka sans liya ho aur kaha ho “ab Theek hai” ( aisse jaisse jaan mein jaan agai ho ) hahahaha

lollzzz

**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Tassneef:
** hahahahahaa
mujeh be ikHtiyaar hansi aagaai
aap ne "ab theek hai " aisse kahaa aur mujehy aisse laggaa
jaisse kissi insaan ka hashar kardene ke baad qeema banaa dene ke baad sukh ka sans liya ho aur kaha ho “ab Theek hai” ( aisse jaisse jaan mein jaan agai ho ) hahahaha

lollzzz

Nahin jee…hum esha kion karne laghay apneh dost keh sath…
Woht o hum isliye keh rehe thay keh ab theek hai …kion keh hum neh apnay uphar walhe msg main aap keh liye kohi msg likha tha…

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[quote]
Originally posted by Nayab:
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lollz

**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **

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aap ke iss tarah sharmaane se mujehy Chachaa Ghalib yaad aa gaye..Chacha ne shaiyaad aap ke lyie hi farmaiyaa hai :-

**Sharm-e-Ruswaai se jaa cHupnaa Naqaab-e-Khaak meiN
Khatm hai Ulfat ki tujh par Pardaadaari haaye haaye **

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**Ham Ehl-e-Qafas tanhaa bhi nahiN har roz Naseem-e-Subah-e-Watan
YaadoN se Mo`attar aati hai AshkoN se Munawwar jaati hai **