Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon..

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

redidentity June 10, 2007, 12:12pm 1

Meri Aik Nazm..

Kal Hum Nai Ek Sapna Dekha
Sapnay Main Uss Ko Betha Dekha
Bethee Thee Jo Khoee Khoee
Jagee Thee Per Sowee Sowee
Janay Kis Kee Aas Laga-ay
Soch Kai Lakhon Deep Jala-ay
Aank Main Uss Kai Bheega Kajal
Sab Ko Dil Ka Haal Suna-ay
Uss Ko Pee Kee Yaad Sata-ay [Pee=Piya]

Per Uss Ko Samjha-ay Kon
Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon

(Ahmer)

Hope Ke Aap Logon Ko Pasand Aye Gi..

Regards,

goodnews June 10, 2007, 2:51pm 2

Re: Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon..

**Wahi! Ap ki umeedon ky mutabiq hamin bari pasand ai. Buhat khub:lajawab:
**

GuL-e-Tasbeeh June 10, 2007, 8:05pm 3

Re: Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon..

Very nice poem Ahmer, thanks for sharing, short but sweet:-)
baqi bhi jald post kareiN:~)

SJ June 21, 2007, 6:27pm 4

Re: Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon..

greatttttt !! **
**bohat aala ! :)

Amal June 22, 2007, 12:51pm 5

Re: Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon..

Now this one is way ahead of the rest you shared with us. Terrific job Ahmer :k: And thanx for sharing

redidentity June 22, 2007, 6:23pm 6

Re: Ga-ay Hu-on Ko La-ay Kon..

thnx Amal n Sonia jee for such sweet appreciation :$