furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

Shab-e-Hijar · February 13, 2007, 9:16pm

gum gashtaa mohabbat ke khwaaboN ki tarah hai woh rooh ke sehraa meiN saraaboN ki tarah hai
woh zeest kay maktab meiN nisaaboN ki tarah hai
paRhta hooN use roz kitaaboN ki tarah hai

ab un se khayaaloN meiN hi ho jaati heiN baateN
go beech meiN parda sa hijaaboN ki tarah hai

us shakhs ke lehje meiN sheeshe ki khanak hai
rag rag meiN utarta hai sharaaboN ki tarah hai

us shakhs ke paikar meiN hai shaakhoN ki lachak si
us shakhs ka chehraa bhi gulaaboN ki tarah hai

jo wasl ki raatoN meiN hai ik maah-e-munawwar
furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

NikamiJano · February 13, 2007, 10:18pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

jo wasl ki raatoN meiN hai ik maah-e-munawwar
furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

tu ap se kis ne kahan mufat ka azab dalain apnay ap ko

ps one of ma fav

High-Tech · February 14, 2007, 12:38am

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

:k:

mera liquor store

AQ · February 14, 2007, 1:20am

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

very nice poem...:)

I had posted in my journal and ended up writting something inspired from it later too...

dau asha'r from my Poem:)

**Soch kaY dariyaa maiN selaaboN kee tarah hai
Woh shakhs pa't jhaR maiN bahaaroN kee tarah hai

Jalti hui reYt maiN thaa Nakh'L kaa sahaaraa**
**"Woh Rooh kaY sehraa maiN SaraaboN kee tarah hai"*

--
*** This Misra' is taken as it is from the original poem**

WiseGuy · February 14, 2007, 11:50am

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

bohat umda, thank you for sharing :)

Shab-e-Hijar · February 14, 2007, 8:32pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

mane kaha dala khudi dal gya
and mery text ka reply nahi kya

Shab-e-Hijar · February 14, 2007, 8:33pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

Shab-e-Hijar · February 14, 2007, 8:35pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

wahh asa lagta hai those shairs are part of this ghazal
very nice AQ

Shab-e-Hijar · February 14, 2007, 8:36pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

shukriya

NikamiJano · February 14, 2007, 9:02pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

sorry abhi dekha aj sab ne sleet ki waja se call in kar de and am by my self in the branch till 6

being_lonely · February 15, 2007, 12:21am

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

riyazi k sawaalon ki tarah hai

iss beha ki aik yeh ghazal bhi hai i,ve heard but 4get ne1 help me out !!!

Aqls · February 15, 2007, 7:22am

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

bohat khoob

farooqahmad · February 15, 2007, 12:40pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

Amazingly good. Thanks.

SJ · February 15, 2007, 12:51pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

zabardust !

Mysterious_Woman · February 15, 2007, 1:10pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

nice one...

Shab-e-Hijar · February 17, 2007, 5:17pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

thanks every1

moonmine · February 17, 2007, 5:51pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

very nice!

Shab-e-Hijar · February 17, 2007, 7:02pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

thanks

Koyal · February 25, 2007, 10:56pm

Re: furqat meiN wohi shakhs azaaboN ki tarah hai

beautiful shabo :)
*