Re: For Mom...
Bala-ain=troubles, misfortunes, calamities?
How does Bala-ain change meri to teri? Teri is OK in the second person if every one's mom is like the narrator's mom in the poem.
The poem, however, appears to be like an exercise on writing poetry about one's mother and does not come to the standard of poet's other creations.
bay-bunyaad baat mut uthaya karain...............app nay ghour say parhee hai Amal ki Ghazal............???
comments zara sensibly diya karain...