For KKF Bhaii..

[queen_24]

Khud likhi hay main nain…abhi abhi

ibtida-e-ishq ki soghaat liye phirta hun
main wo shakhs hun jo dil main har baat liye phirta hun

nasheb-o-faraz ke ramuz-o-O’qaaf se kia lena
dil main hazaro raaz main saath liye phirta hun

dil-e-bayjaan kay dard-o-ruswaai ki qasam..
main jeet ke bhi piyar ki maat liye phirta hun

seher ki junmbish hi sahi..raat ka nasha bhi
teri yaad ka sabaq din-o-raat liye phirta hun

ye sauda-e-dil jo kiya, khasara hi hua
main piyar main kitna bara ghaat liye phirta hun..

[KKF]

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waah, kia baat hai…thankoo!

aap bhii shaa’ira nikliiN, zahe naseeb! achchhii koshish hai, maashaa Allah! Urdu to baRii paaye kii iste’maal kii hai! good job! merii Haalat-e-zaar kii saHeeH 'akkaasii kii hai!

ibtida-e-ishq ki soghaat liye phirta hun
main wo shakhs hun jo dil main har baat liye phirta hun

ibtidaa to kabhii huii thii ab to ‘intihaa-e-ishq’ hai
**
dil-e-bayjaan kay dard-o-ruswaai ki qasam..
main jeet ke bhi piyar ki maat liye phirta hun**

aaaaaawwwwwwww…mujhe to lagtaa hai k maiN haar ke bhii jeet gayaa kiuN k uskii jeet meN hii merii jeet hai!
**
ye sauda-e-dil jo kiya, khasara hi hua
main piyar main kitna bara ghaat liye phirta hun..**.

yeh to saudaa e junuuN thaa jo liye phirtaa rahaa mujhe kabhii sahraaoN meN kabhii daruaaoN meN to kabhii hawaaoN meN

bahot Khoob…shukria

[queen_24]

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i AM a poetess too btw, which i never revealed at GS bus aamad hui aur GS samnay tha to socha kuch likh hi daaltay hain…

[KKF]

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@queen_24

i AM a poetess too btw, which i never revealed at GS bus aamad hui aur GS samnay tha to socha kuch likh hi daaltay hain…

maashaa Allah, bahot achchhaa kiyaa aur is ‘aamad’ ko aate rahnaa chahaiye aur iskii Hausala afzaaii ham sab zaroor karte raheNge, iA! aur na jaane kaun kaun se rustam / rustamah GS pe chhupe hoNge/gii…unheN unke biloN se kaise nikaalaa jaaye?

der aayad, durust aayad!

[queen_24]

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andar ka fankar nikala nahin jata khud bahar aajata hay...... waqt dijye.. hum to bohat purani shaaira hain aur kitaab bhi hay chapnay ko..over 100 poetries likh chukay hain par dil kerta hay apni hadd takk mehdood rakhen :@:

[KKF]

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@queen_24

andar ka fankar nikala nahin jata khud bahar aajata hay...... waqt dijye.. hum to bohat purani shaaira hain aur kitaab bhi hay chapnay ko..over 100 poetries likh chukay hain par dil kerta hay apni hadd takk mehdood rakhen :@:

aaaaaaawwwwwww...nahiiN nahiiN baba...shaa'ir kaa kalaam qaum kii amaanat hotii hai jise qaum tak pahoNchaanaa shaa'ir kaa farz hai! :) bas ab aap post kartii rahiiye, iA ham lutf andoz hoNge! :)

[STA]

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@queen_24

Khud likhi hay main nain…abhi abhi

ibtida-e-ishq ki soghaat liye phirta hun
main wo shakhs hun jo dil main har baat liye phirta hun

nasheb-o-faraz ke ramuz-o-O’qaaf se kia lena
dil main hazaro raaz main saath liye phirta hun

dil-e-bayjaan kay dard-o-ruswaai ki qasam..
main jeet ke bhi piyar ki maat liye phirta hun

seher ki junmbish hi sahi..raat ka nasha bhi
teri yaad ka sabaq din-o-raat liye phirta hun

ye sauda-e-dil jo kiya, khasara hi hua
main piyar main kitna bara ghaat liye phirta hun..

oye, you to shaerah nikli. wow. pehaly kiyon nahi bataya.

kuch meray liye ashar dedicate kardain.

[queen_24]

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@ KKF:

@STA: pehle btati to kiya kerlete chalo likh ke post karungi… bas

[queen_24]

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muqawwe bhai kidher hain??

[KKF]

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@queen_24

@ KKF:

iskaa matlab kia hotaa hai? mujhe nahiiN pataa! cursor is par rakkhaa to likh kar aayaa “pagal”…ab yeh bataayeN k paagal kaun hai? maiN, aap yaa paRhnewaalaa? :c: wazaaHat talab baat hai!

[muqawwee123]

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@queen_24

muqawwe bhai kidher hain??

Taraveeh k baad iss thread ko tafseel se dekhoonga.. stay with us

[KKF]

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@muqawwee123

Taraveeh k baad iss thread ko tafseel se dekhoonga.. stay with us

kia hameN bhii taraaveeH paRhnii paRegii? iftaar pe to bulaayaa nahiiN magar taraaveeH ke liye bulaa liyaa!

[queen_24]

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@Khalil KhaaN FaaKhta

iskaa matlab kia hotaa hai? mujhe nahiiN pataa! cursor is par rakkhaa to likh kar aayaa “pagal”…ab yeh bataayeN k paagal kaun hai? maiN, aap yaa paRhnewaalaa? :c: wazaaHat talab baat hai!

maira aisa koi irada nahin tha, ye to wo shakal thi jo ye bata rahi thee ke aapka mashwara zair-e-ghor hay, jaan ki aman paaon to koshish ki jasakti hay yaha do char kalaam paish hi kar daalun… magar… mmmmmm…sochungi

@muqawwee123

Taraveeh k baad iss thread ko tafseel se dekhoonga.. stay with us

aray aap to pakistan main bethen hain shayad, haan wahan to roza khul gaya hay

[KKF]

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@queen_24

…jaan ki aman paaon to koshish ki jasakti hay yaha do char kalaam paish hi kar daalun… magar… mmmmmm…sochungi

oh achchhaa! zaroor pesh kareN…ham bardaasht kar leNge!

[queen_24]

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[KKF]

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@queen_24

haN, yeh to Theek hai…ham aise hii uchhleNge aapkaa kalaam sun kar

are haN…apnaa next kalaam apnii sureeli aawaaz meN tarannum se paRhiyegaa…ok?

[queen_24]

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nahin… abhi ye baat, ke mairay apnay songs bhi hain aur main ne unhe compose bhi kiya hay, main GS p reveal nahin kerna chahti

[KKF]

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@queen_24

nahin… abhi ye baat, ke mairay apnay songs bhi hain aur main ne unhe compose bhi kiya hay, main GS p reveal nahin kerna chahti

oh achchhaa…waah bhai, waah…aap to saHeeH ma’noN meN ‘chhupii rustamah’ nikliiN!..

share nahiiN kareNgii achchhaa to phir jab album market meN aa jaaye to bataaiyegaa are baba…GS waale koii langoor to nahiiN…unheN bhii sunaa deN…vo bhii daad de deNge… do NOT hesitate to share…it’s ok baba!

[muqawwee123]

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wow. MA you are so talented :k:

I like each shair of your ghazal Hope to see more from you.

[STA]

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@queen_24

@ KKF:

@STA: pehle btati to kiya kerlete chalo likh ke post karungi… bas