(for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

khawabRung July 26, 2011, 5:46pm 1

Darman-e-Gham-e-Hijar Agar Ho To Mujhy Kya,
Tumhain Ab Meri Khaber Ho To Mujhy Kya?

Jab Ho Gai Gam Sy Meri Dunya Teh-o-Bala,
Ab Ek Jahan Zair-o-Zabar Ho To Mujhy Kya?

Jab Khaaq Bhi Baqi Na Rahi Qalb-o-Jigar Ki,
Ab Koi Mere Liye Khaaq Basar Ho To Mujhy Kya?

Han Ab DiL-e-Veraa’n Me Ujala Nahi Hota,
Tum Gherat-e-Khursheed-o-Qamar Ho To Mujhy Kya?

Aur Hy Ab Meri Dunya Me Sarasar Shab-e-Furqat,
Ab Is Shab-e-Furqat Ki Sehar Ho Tu Mujhy Kya?

Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,
Aur Phir Bhi Kisi Ki Na Guzar Ho Tu Mujhy Kya…

Amal July 26, 2011, 6:35pm 2

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Wah…wah…wah…ye hui na baat …bohat khoobsoorat ghazal hey KR, thanx a lot for posting it

waleedhbk July 26, 2011, 6:40pm 3

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Awesomeeeee :k:

babri July 26, 2011, 6:42pm 4

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Beautiful KR really nice Ghazal.thanks for dedication.

pktun July 27, 2011, 3:19am 5

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

beautiful :k:

Koyal July 27, 2011, 5:09am 6

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

:k:

khawabRung July 27, 2011, 11:56am 7

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Dear, Amal, & babri, yeh gazal dedicat nei ki main nay ap ko.

babri July 27, 2011, 6:03pm 8

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

yaar KR bhai ap meri samj se bahir ho ek min main mind kar jatey ho.
khud hee likhtey ho (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki, aur phir kehtey ho Dear Amal & Babri ye gazal dedicat nei ki main ap ko.
chal yaar meri hee samj main ghalti hai.
keep it up.

khawabRung July 27, 2011, 6:11pm 9

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

kehty hain k aqalmand ko ishara he kafi hota hay. Ap ko meri batoo ki samj nei ati. Ap ko poetry ki kya samj aye gi.

babri July 27, 2011, 6:21pm 10

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

ye bilkul sehi kaha ap ne maine isi liye Amal bhai se classe lena shoro ki hain.

khawabRung July 28, 2011, 7:41am 11

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Shairi ko samjhna buchoo ka kam nehi,, agar ap ko Amal say b zayada behtar ustad milta hay to us say rabta karain.

babri July 28, 2011, 8:28am 12

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

baki ustad mangay hain merey bhai aur abhi meri umar hee kiya hai irf 12 saal agay ja k samj a jaye gi jab pyaar ho ga

Shazia_Arif July 28, 2011, 2:39pm 13

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

nice dedication.

babri July 28, 2011, 3:34pm 14

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

ssssssshhhhhhhhh maaar pare gi KR bhai ne kaha hai ye dedication nahi hai :(

Innocent_Smile July 28, 2011, 5:15pm 15

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Amal bhai mere bhi ustad g hain

Innocent_Smile July 28, 2011, 5:15pm 16

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

behtreen ghazal hai KR :)

babri July 28, 2011, 6:39pm 17

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Ustad-e-mutramam ko bataon ga k ap un ki ustadi se khush nahi ho is liye ro rehi ho.

khawabRung July 29, 2011, 5:34pm 18

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

Dear,s ap k ustad G to hoon gay isi liye to gazal post ki hy mujy is sy kya...

Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar JayeKisi Ki,

Aur Phir Bhi Kisi Ki Na Guzar Ho Tu Mujhy Kya..

Shazia_Arif July 30, 2011, 3:25pm 19

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

sorry i take my words back :hinna:

Shazia_Arif July 30, 2011, 3:26pm 20

Re: (for Amal & Babri) Achha Hy Bin FARAZ K Guzar Jaye Kisi Ki,

ye s keh k kise mukhatib kia???kahin mujh se tu koi gustakhi nai ho gai??? :hinna: