For a friend....

Allah ne hukum diya Dost hon to Achey rakhna,
Huzoor( Sallalaho alaye vasallam ) ne kaha kabhi dosti ke dhaage kachey na rakhna.
Hukum maan ne ke liye her din izhaar kiya,
Rub per mainey intehaa aetibaar kiya
Her din intezaar kiya, kisssi insaan ka,
jub woh waqt aya to mein bhi heraan tha,
Kis ruup mein bhejay mujhe woh dost,
Jo muskurahat dalta meri hont per her roz,
Jiske bina zindagi mein dil hi na lagey,
Jiske bina aankhon mein rung hi na sajey,
Jiske bina kaanon mein sur hi na bajey,
Raat mein chaand hojaye fuzool
din mein suraj ki hojaye bhuul ,
laiken jub woh mere pass chali aaye,
to Chaand Khush hoker raat mein chamkaye,
Suraj hans hans ker asmaan per latak jaye,
Kaan is duniya ke geeton se lashkarain,
Aankhein sitaron ki roshni se bherjain,
Zindagi ke her koney mujhey khushiyon se satain,
log jal jal ker bolein…
Aye Khush naseeb! teri takdeer ki kiya baat hai,
yeh kaun hai, jo zindagi ki tasveer mein tere saat hai ,
Aur mein bolta rehjaonga…
yeh woh hai jo koi aur nahi, ek pari, ek dost, ek saathi hi sahi,
Iske dushmano ko hamesha ke liye sunsaan kerdun,
Sirf aur sirf iske liye apni jaan qurbaan kerdun.

I guess i just started poetry, is this guud enufF? I need critics :stuck_out_tongue: if you like it plz say so, but if it needs work, let me know, i luv suggestions/complains/comments etc. It perfects my literature for next time.

It’s very good:k:
Don’t wory as you’ll wite you’ll impove, but really this poem is good.
You shouldn’t stop writing.:slight_smile:

thanks swera :)

^ u r welcome:)

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