Aliyish
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Kia karoon , kay Fitrat mayre , kuch bari ajeeb hai
Durr kardaytah hoon ushay joh mayre qareeb hai
Mohabaat or Khuloos kee kab mujay tameez hai
Aksar Tor’ta hoon wooh dil , joh bohat aziz hai
Cha’hoo gar tum mujay , tu tooat kay chahna tum
Mayray is dil nadan ki , yea qeematay Kahreed hai
Dil karay jo maan.mani , mein bi karnay dayta hoon
yea baat mayre manay ga , is say kab ba’eed hai
Haaq pay Jaan dee jisnay, Karbala kay shahra mein
Us Imaa’may Aali ki , Mayre Zindgii Murreed hai
(Aliyish)
SJ
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Re: Fitraat Mayre
bohat ajeeb fitrat paee hai app nay janab…
Re: Fitraat Mayre
Alyish,
the first shaire is a tell tale of the speaker of the poem.
can there be a second set of lines which sets things right?
thanks for sharing.
Dushwari
Amal
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Re: Fitraat Mayre
Nice work Aliyish :k: Thanx for sharing it with us.
Re: Fitraat Mayre
Very nice, thanks for sharing:-)