i m posting my first sher(of course not written by me) here
read somewhere i like it simple n cute here it is
maut ka ek din muteyan hai
neend raat bhar kyun nhi ati
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DA: good one
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I thought its urs :cobra:
Buhat khoub sharing karti raha karain 
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i m posting my first sher(of course not written by me) here read somewhere i like it simple n cute here it is
maut ka ek din muteyan hai neend raat bhar kyun nhi ati
neend na ane ki wajah koi aor hay aap ne bataya tha mujhe :@:
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i m posting my first sher(of course not written by me) here read somewhere i like it simple n cute here it is
maut ka ek din muteyan hai neend raat bhar kyun nhi ati
Devi ji kia baat hai. pehla shair wo bhi Ghalib ka. Its from Ghalib famous Ghazal 'Koi Umeed bar nahin aati'. The Ghazal contain some most famous ashar of Ghalib, which are even popular among masses and they use it in their routine conversation.
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Koi umeed bar nahin aati,
Koi soorat nazar nahin aati.
Mout ka aik din mu’ayan hai,
Neend kyun raat bhar nahin aati?
Aage aati thee haal-e Dil pe hansi,
Ab kisi baat per nahin aati.
Janta hon sawab-e taa’at-o zahad,
Per tabeeyat idhar nahin aati.
Hai kuch aisi hi baat jo chup hon,
Warna kya baat kar nahin aati!
Kyu na cheekhon k yaad karte hain,
Meri aawaaz gar nahin aati.
Daag-e Dil gar nazar nahin aata,
Boo bhi ae chaaraagar nahin aati?
*Hum wahan hain jahan se hum ko bhi,
Kuch humari khabar nahin aati.
*
Marte hain aarazoo main marne ki,
Mout aati hai, per nahin aati..!
*Kaaba kis moonh se jaaoge ‘Ghalib’?
Sharam tum ko magar nahi aati..
*
[/QUOTE]
Keep sharing :)
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dear poetry ppl mujhe bilkul bhi poetry nhi ati but since my cafe buddies r also in poetry forum so mei bhi apni presence show krna cha rahi thi 
IS bhai 
yeah tu mei ne kahin parha tu share kr dya apne lya nhi likha
i m thinking i l share all the sher i l read here this is my own personal thread for sher o shiri 
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here is next one
mohabbat kr saktay ho tu khuda se karo faraz
mitti ke kehlono se kabhie wafa nhi milti
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poetry forum k mod han n yeah bhi nhi pata k kaun se sher kis ka hai
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Devi ji kia baat hai. pehla shair wo bhi Ghalib ka. Its from Ghalib famous Ghazal 'Koi Umeed bar nahin aati'. The Ghazal contain some most famous ashar of Ghalib, which are even popular among masses and they use it in their routine conversation.
Keep sharing :)
thnkx muqawee bus ap k invitation pe ai hun :)
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DA: good one
thnk u STA :)
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Devi Ji Sannan ne topic ko dekh kar ye kaha tha..
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here is next one
mohabbat kr saktay ho tu khuda se karo faraz mitti ke kehlono se kabhie wafa nhi milti
thnkx muqawee bus ap k invitation pe ai hun :)
Nice selection you have. Keep sharing. :)
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nice selection :-)
keep it up :@:
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menu pata aay mai tu bas aise e tang kar raha tha 
go ahead
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Topic ko dikh kar tou main life1 main move karnay walla tha 
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Sannan urdu kay tamam shu’ra kay kalam nikal kar parhing :cobra:
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lolz u ppl r so funy
but i mentioned its not written by me
thnkx for appreciating my efforts
here is next one
tumhari ankhion mei yeah jo nami hai
sirf aur sirf iodine ki kami hai
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kyun asa kya likh diya mei ne :sid:
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Muqawwee bhai aap kao samjhain gaiay kah main nay youn keon kaha 
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koi tu samjahi mujhe 