Firaq!

Capricorn · October 28, 2002, 5:29pm

teray firaq mein mujh par ho saanihay guzray
woh agar din pe guzarte to raat ho jaata!

NikamiJano · October 28, 2002, 7:31pm

Re: Firaq!

:k:
capo kis k firaq main wesay bohat khobsurat sher aik hamin be yaad aia hia isi per

teRay firaq k lamhaY shumaaR kartey huweiY bikhaR gaye hain hum tuj ko yaad karteY huweY

chand_chehra · October 28, 2002, 8:49pm

Re: Re: Firaq!

capo and jano :k:

ghazal_kisi_ke · October 29, 2002, 2:00am

hi capricon and everybody
:k:
nice

_Masoom_Muskaan · October 30, 2002, 7:41am

nice:)

Lamhay · October 30, 2002, 9:59am

wah wah bahut khoob!

Amal · October 30, 2002, 11:19am

very nice Cap:k:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · October 30, 2002, 12:05pm

Nice She'r Capi :)

Eastern_Thoughts · October 30, 2002, 2:13pm

Nice shair Capri and Nj ....

Hasan Rizvi says...

ye shab-e-firaq ye bebasii hai.n qadam qadam pe udaasiyaa.N
meraa saath ko_ii na de sakaa merii hasarate.n hai.n dhuaa.N dhuaa.N

ye fizaa jo gard-o-Gubaar hai merii bekasii kaa mazaar hai
mai.n vo phuul huu.N jo na khil sakaa merii zi.ndagii me.n vafaa kahaa.N

.

arifnawaz1 · October 30, 2002, 4:24pm

Great !

Laakh yeh chaaha ke us ko bhool jaon per Qateel
Hauslay apni jagah hain bebasi apni jagah

Capricorn · October 30, 2002, 4:58pm

Thank you everybody for appreciation and your own contribution :k:

system · October 31, 2002, 2:40pm

bohat khoob :k:

Capricorn · October 31, 2002, 5:31pm

Thank you