firaq se bhi gaye hum visal se bhi gaye

firaq se bhi gaye hum visal se bhi gaye
subuk huye hain to aish-e-malal se bhi gaye

jo but-kade mein the wo sahiban-e-kashf-o-kamal
haram mein aaye tp kashf-o-kamal se bhi gaye

usi nigah ki narmi se dag-maga gaye qadam
usi nigah ki tevar sambhal se bhi gaye

gam-e-hayat-o-gam-e-dost ki kashmakash mein
hum aise log to ranj-o-malal se bhi gaye

wo log jin se teri bazm mein the hangame
gaye to kya teri bazm-e-khayal se bhi gaye

hum aise kon the lekin qafas ki ye duniya
ki par-shikaston mein apni misal se bhi gaye

charag-e-bazm abhi jan-e-anjuman na bujha
ki ye bujha to tere khad-o-khal se bhi gaye

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:lajawab:

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firaq se bhi gaye hum visal se bhi gaye

subuk huye hain to aish-e-malal se bhi gaye

Muqa...plz explain wht the poet is saying.

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ghar ke rahee na ghaat ke rahe..... wo wala muhara to suna hoga.... Ishq aur hijr insaan ki paon talle ke zameen khenchne main mahir hain

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The first line I understood...
But kyon na idher k rahey na udhar ke ?

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subuk means light.. main bhi shayar itna roya ho ke dil halka hogaya ho..

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Nai...the reason for the first line...

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kabhi kabhar guilt ki waja se insan apne rights surrender kar deta hai.. kisi ko chahne ka right.. kisi ko paane ka right... na paa kar uska malaal manae ka haq. shayad ye wo situation hai

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Kaisi guilt k baat kr rahe hain aap ?

PS: mai baal k khaal nai nikal rahi hoon..I really want to understand k insan ko aisi situation ka samna kyon krna parta hai.

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guilt to loose someone for his / her own actions

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Doesn't make sense..

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If you lost love one due to circumstances you don't have control on. You will not be guilty and will be missing that person with the thought that if that happened / not happened we were together. But, you lost that person because of your own actions, you could do something but didn't do that lead losing that person, the there is guilt which confiscate all rights.

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Maybe i misunderstood the meaning of firaq...
Isnt it loosing ? Distancing ?

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yes its alag ho jana.. tafreeq pad jana...

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Phir its not making sense to me...
K apni guilt k wajah se dono se gaye

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The situation may not be applicable to all....

doosri situation is when loose everything after you lost a person. In that case 'wisaal' is out of question and the person lost sense of happiness and sadnees... wo jo kehte hain 'pathar ka ban jana' wo wali situation

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might be i misunderstood but i have a different feeling to explain this shair...

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do the honor sir !

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notepad may likh raha hoon wait karoo :p

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firaq se bhi gaye hum visal se bhi gaye
subuk huye hain to aish-e-malal se bhi gaye

Jo may nay samjha hai woo yeh hai k mohabat may jab insan bilkul doob jata hai, tu us may doo waqat hotay hain, aik jab woo mahboob k sath hota hai or aik jis may woo apnay mahboob say bichar jata hai, abb bazahir shaier yeh keh raha hai k firaq say bhi gaye or wisal say bhi, lakin dar haqeeqat shaier us kafiyat may hai k jab woo apnay mahboob say juda ho gaya hai tu us k baad us pay yeh kafiyat aye k woo firaq say bhi gaya or wisal say bhi ...woo kaisay??

woo aisay k jab insan firaq may hota hai tu woo mahboob k liyay tarapta hai, rota hai, intazar karta hai, firaq may ghariyan ginta hai, or isi kafiyat may usay woo sab lamhat yaad atay hain jab woo mahboob k sath tha , us k sath guzra howa har lamha har baat us ko yaad ati hai, woo apnay ird grid wohi manzar bana leta hai apni dunia saja leta hai , tu firaq may he wisal ki kafiyat bana leta hai, lakin kiya hota hai k ahista ahista waqat ki gardish , or musalsal ronay say woo, or kuch baqi logon say mail jool karnay say woo kafiat kam hona shoro ho jati hai, kion k waqat har zakham ko khatam tu nahi karta lakin kafi had tak kam kar deta hai, yehi shaier keh raha hai k may subuk howa matlab halka yani roo k bhi tu insan khud ko halka feel karta hai, tu aish-e-malaal kiya tha shaier k pass? yehi k woo firaq may tarapta tha or usi firaq may wisal k lamhay bhi talash kar leta tha lakin abb shaier ko afsoos sa feel ho raha hai k gardish-e-waqat us k dil say mohabat tu nahi nikal saki lakin woo jo kafiyat awal awal thi ab baqi nahi....

yeh may nay understand kiya hai...agay jaisay aap chahain.....