fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Koyal · February 20, 2011, 2:31pm

amaR keR lo wo sab lamhey
jo ham ne yooN guzaRey haiN
seheR keR lo wo sab rateiN
jahaN apni hi dunya thi
jahaN sanseiN bhi apni theeN
jahaN sapney bhi apney thay
safeR keR lo wo sab rastey
jahaN kuch bhi wafa’eiN haiN
jahaN khushboo hai pyaroN ki
jahan yadeiN haiN yarooN ki
fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal
ke tum ne kis ko kHoya hai
usey tum dhoondh pao ga’ey
kabhi phiR dekh pao gai
taheR ja’oo jahaN ho tum
k us biN tum adhooRey ho
kabhi phiR mil na pa’oo ga’ey
usey dhoondo ga’ey yadooN meiN
usey is pal bula lo tum
k ye lamhey tumhaRey haiN

fara · February 20, 2011, 2:37pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Awesome.. what a beautiful piece of poetry!

Koyal · February 20, 2011, 2:42pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

thanks fara :)

Amal · February 20, 2011, 2:48pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Koyal ji aap to hat kar hi aati heiN…kya baat hey aur kya la’jawaab selection hey aap ki … lekin shikwa ye hey ke aap bohat kam kam aateiN heiN :pcg:

Koyal · February 20, 2011, 4:11pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

abhi kam kam ati tu loG peptobismol daitey zaida aiey tu IV he lagwa dalaiN

deadsoul · February 20, 2011, 10:49pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

bht khob

muddii · February 21, 2011, 3:50am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Zabardast Koyal Jii as Usual:)

UZ · February 21, 2011, 5:05am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Koyal kaya achi ghazzal hai :k:

UZ · February 21, 2011, 5:06am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

kis ko takleef hoi aap ke aaanay se naam batayein :ASA: And aap aya karein IVs ke parwa naa karein ;)

Koyal · February 21, 2011, 2:06pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

ap kahiN doc tu nahi :D meray ko needle se daR lagta :(

ehsan · February 21, 2011, 2:08pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Ghazab kee ghazal hai. :k:

Koyal · February 21, 2011, 2:08pm

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

thanks muddi g :) kahan kahaN gum rahtey ap :)

Daanie · February 22, 2011, 4:16am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

buhut khoob :)

Koyal · February 24, 2011, 3:00am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

thanks ehsan g

Koyal · February 24, 2011, 3:00am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

thanks Daanie :)

UZ · February 24, 2011, 5:33am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Nahi mein doc nahi hoon itni parhi likhi hoti to yahaan naa hoti Haam magar poetry forum kaa ilaaj zaroor kerti hoon

Aryaan · February 24, 2011, 10:40am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

Good One Koyal..:)

Koyal · February 24, 2011, 11:49am

Re: fikeR keR lo zaRa ek pal ke tum ne kis ko khoya hai

oh tu ap b koyal ki taRa nikami lakin doc b yahaN atey hain jab ye poltrey form bun jata