Re: Few lines of Poetic Cricket…
wah kya baat hai aap ki, aap ko tou award milna chahie
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Wah! Bohat khoob ,,, :D
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award deney waley he nahi to award kya miley ga
glad you liked it.
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chalo aur tou hain na, wo award dain yah award dene wala award de, farak kya hai…milay ga tou award na 
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did you actually write that. 
you are good.
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Bizz,
All my words, thanks dude.
Chorni, jin se award lena ho wo dain to acha lagta hai... warna mongphali to subhi kha letey hain... har wakat sariyaal na raha karo ;)
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very nice jaan leva, i really like ur poetry :) its sad to see so few replies.
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Thanks dude… here is another one:
Sore losers…
Abi to shuruwaat hai ye tumarey sath india
kya karo ghi tum jub uteray ghi tumari bindia
Roo uthey ga sara India teri haar par
Tere har zakham par namak barsey ga afridi ki maar par
Shoaib ke action ko target karte ho apni haar par
Out ho jate ho phir bhi tum ek super-sub ki ball par
Shoaib ki hai double-joint kya tum nain nahi dekha
Ye sore losers ki tara complain karna tum nain kahan se seekha
Nahi hai tum main bardasht shikaast khaney ki
Jeetney ki tamana hai jeet saktey nahi tum phir bhi
Haar ke rooney wale ko duniyaa kya kehti hai pata ho ga
Jub phir Haar jao ghe tum to tumara excuse kya ho ga
Shoaib ki jaan chohro Asif ki fikar karo hai wo Sheikhupura se
De dey ga wo tumain wicketain tumari milta hai wo McGrath se
Related thread:
http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?t=207298
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FB chahta hai main usey thori poetry doon
Thori izzaat jo Indians ki bani hai wo bhi le loon
Kya karoon main India ki es kamyaabi ka bhala
Roo Roo ke jo jeetey kehtey hain usey log dalla
Meri aukaat kya ke main pakistani team ki shaan main ghustakhi karon
Haar Jeet hissaa hai game ka kion main ansoon bharoon
Jao nahi main koe indian ata nahi mujey roona dhona pyaarey
Hari hai Pakistani team par zinda dil hain humarey pyaarey
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Kya karoon main India ki es kamyaabi ka bhala Roo Roo ke jo jeetey kehtey hain usey log dalla
Meri aukaat kya ke main pakistani team ki shaan main ghustakhi karon Haar Jeet hissaa hai game ka kion main ansoon bharoon
Jao nahi main koe indian ata nahi mujey roona dhona pyaarey Hari hai Pakistani team par zinda dil hain humarey pyaarey
still no improvement. Still Wazan is missing..
I heard that pain brings best out of poets and though you may improve. I guess you are lost cause. :D
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Lagti hai tujey terey dil par meri poetry main kya karoon
Teri khushi hai bhai tu enjoy kar main kion maroon
wazan buhat hai pakistani side se dekho and i aint a poet.
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jaan leva, tera team hai bara hi paindoo
ab chal patli gali se kat le, maha rondoo
queer asadullah khan kachra
ps: wazan bohut hai, aalu ko to dekho.
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Queer, poetry ki hai ya pud mara hai?
Try this:
Kis nain keh dia tuj se ke hai humari team paindo
Lagta hai tujey har koe apney jesa tu hai jo gando
baat karta hai tu jo esa lagta hai pudd maara hai
hua ab indian geedar bhi sheir jo pakistan haara hai
Koe baat nahi rundal dekh lain ghay next series main
Ek match hara jo india ghuss jao ghay tum apni hee main
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not one bhai.. theen.. got it.!!!!:D
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jaan leva ki to sulag gayi G
haye, bohut hi mushkil hai yeh kaand
beychara, dhoti bhi utar gaya khule aam
is pungay ka bohut bura hua aakhir anjaam
wah wah kachra ji wah
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Once a veggie, always a veggie: :hehe:
Bun nahi sakta Irfan ik asli pathan
Dekhi nahi abi tak us ki bowling main jaan
Haar jyain ye to kehtey hain pitch kharab banai
Jeet jyain to utha lete hain bowlers ko sar par oh bhai
Indian bowling attack nahi ye hai **topi drama
**Dow chokay chahkay lag jain to yaad atey hain nana
Banay hoon jo bowler veggie burger kha kha kar
Bantay hain wo geedar se sher pitch ke zor par
Kisee nain theek he kaha ke hai ye ek pop-gun attack
Dekhte hain england ke khilaaf karti hai kya ye geedar pack
Related thread:
http://www.paklinks.com/gs/showthread.php?p=3904493#post3904493
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How did I miss this thread,
Keep it up folks, I wish I was in your class and could say some of my own Kalam, Lekin that was not meant to be, I can only Plagarise (sp).
Aejaz
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Asli pathanon kay dard bhare geet:
naam hai mera afridi pathan
mara mujhe nakli pathan
aisa laga mujh pe gira chattaan
ab to mei hoon haspataal mei, leta bayjaan