i dont know ke yeah idea app logoun ko pasand atta hai ya nahi. agar nahi to moderator sahiba ko ijazat hai ke is post ko delete kardein or agar hannnnnn
to lets start it
mein pehla sher de rahi houn us ke last word se sher koi male hi dega. yeah shart hai. aur us male ke sher ke last word se jawab sirf koi female degi
means ke har male ko female aur har female ko sirf male hi jawab desakte hain. so lets start it
“tuuth gai to kirchiyoun ke siwa kya dein ge
kaanch ke peer khayaloun mein lagaya na karo
gar bicharna para hum se to jiyo ge kese
dil ki gehraiyoun se itna hamein chaha na karo”
wow
shakeeb apne taaruf ke liya bas itna kafi hai
hum un se baach ke chalte hain jo raste aamm hojaein!
Wo jin ke sehan meiN ameeri ka shajar lagta hey
unka har aeb bhi zamaaney ko hunar lagta hey
meri maaN mujh sey naaraaz na ho jaey kaheeN
sar pe aaNchal nahi hota to dar lagta hey
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(ideally to kisi female ko ye sheir post karna chaheeye tha … mujhey waao sey abhi bas yehi yaad aaya
yad karna bhi na chaho gaye per yad ayan gaye ham
teray khawabon teri nindon pe cha jain gaye ham
meri tasveer ko dekho gaye har shay main magar
teri phonch se boht door jab ho jain gaye ham
“Don’t be shallow by saying: if people do good, we will do good; and if they do wrong, we will do wrong; but accustom yourselves to do good if the people do good, and not to do wrong if they do wrong.”
pasand karne ka bohat shukriya mail and gemini the great. bui lets see ke aya saab participate karte hain ya nahi. warna phir maza nahi aye ga. theek hai na. i like this coz bait bazi to hoti hi rehti hai magar is tarhaan competition bar jata hai!
shakeeb apne taaruf ke liya bas itna kafi hai
hum un se baach ke chalte hain jo raste aamm hojaein!
Mein Ney Samjha Tha Key To Hey To Darakhshan Hey Hayat
Tera Gham Hei To Gham-E-Dehr Ka Jhagra Kia Hey
Teree Soorat Sey Hei Aalam Mein Baharon Ko Sabaat
Teri Ankhon Key Siwa Duniya Mey Rakhaa Kia Hey
Too Jo Mil Jayey TO Taqdeer Nigoon Ho Jayey
Yoon naa Tha Mein Ney Faqat Chaha Tha Yoon Ho Jayey
Mujh Sey Pehlee See Mahabbat Meree Mehboob Naa Maang
Anginat Sadion Key Tareek Baheemana Tilism
Resham-o-Atlas-o-Kamkhab Mey Bunwayey Huey
Ja Baja Bikhrey Huey Koocha-o-Bazaar Mey Jism
Khaak Mey Lithrey Huey Khoon Mey Nehlayey
Lot Jaatee Hey Idhar Ko Bhee Nazar Kia Keejay
Ab Bhee Dilkash Hey Tera Husn Magar Kia Keejay
Aur Bhee Dukh Hein Zamaney Mey Mahabbat Key Siwa
Rahatein Aur Bhee Hein Wasl Kee Rahat Key Siwa
Mujh Sey Pehli See Mahabbat Meri Mehboob Naa Maang
"Gaaf"
(Faiz)
[This message has been edited by ramyssysIX (edited March 12, 2002).]
galiooN main kasa shoor tha kyu bheer se maqtal main thi
kya wasf is shair maiN tha kya baat is pagal maiN thi
next*~ye~*
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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*
ab ke rut badli to khushboO ka safar dekhay ga koN
zakhM phooloON ke tarha mahkain gay par dekhay ga koN**
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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*
Naheen Minnat Kash-E-Taban Shuneedan Daastan Meri
Khumoshi Guftugu Hei, BeiZabani Hey Zaban Meri
"ye"
P.S. Pardon me guys, but I am a fan of Iqbal and his poetry is in a kind of a different tone then the contemporary stuff. Please do not mind the change in the tempo
The next sher in the Ghazal is
"Yeh Dastoor-E-Zabanbandi hey keisa teri mehfil mei
Yahan to Baat karney to tarasti hei zaban meri" (just fyi)
[This message has been edited by ramyssysIX (edited March 13, 2002).]
yehi hai qismatay sehra yehi kraM tera
ke boondh boondh ata kar ghta ghta lay ja
~~alif~~**
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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*
its realy good that every body is participating in it. hmm lagge rahein saab and hav fun. ab moka mila hai to mein ne soocha ke mein bhi ek bari le loun
to
yeah saach hai saba bhool gai wo hamein lekin
hum yaad na ayein unhein ussa bhi nahi hai!
ye again
shakeeb apne taaruf ke liya bas itna kafi hai
hum un se baach ke chalte hain jo raste aamm hojaein!
ye tumhari talkh nawaiyaaN koi aur sah kar dekha to day
ye jo hum main gum maiN nibh'a hai mere hoslay ka kamaaL hai
~*ye~*
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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa'N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
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~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*
