fasl e gull key aakhir mein phool in key khiltey hain

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

deep_ocean August 6, 2007, 10:38am 1

roshni mizajoun ka kya ajab muqaddar hai
zindgii key rastey mein bichney walley kaantoun ko
rah sey hattaney mein
aik aik tinkey sey aashiyaan bananey mein
khusbooien pakarney mein gulistaan sajaney mein
umar kaat daitey hain
umar kaat daitey hain
aur apney apnay hissey key phool baant daitey hain

kaisi kaisi khwaahish ko qatl kartey jatey hain
dar-guzar key gulshan mein abar ban key rehtey hain
sabr key samandar mein kashtiyaa chalatey hain
yeh nahi k in ko is roz o shab ki khaahish ka
kuch silla nahi milta
marney walli aasoun ka
khoon baha nahi milta

zindgii key daman mein jis qadar bhi khushiyaan hain
sab hi haath aati hain
sab hii mil bhi jatii hain
waqt par nahi miltien , waqt par nahi aatien
ya’anii in ko mehnat ka
ajar mil to jatta hai
lekin is trah jaisey
qarz kii raqam koii qist qist ho jaye
asal jo ibaarat ho pas e nawisht ho jaye
fasl e gull key aakhir mein phool in key khiltey hain
in key sehan mein sooraj dair sey nikaltey hain

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 4:29am 2

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Sheal August 7, 2007, 4:48am 3

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Very nice gehray samandar :)

redidentity August 7, 2007, 5:02am 4

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Very Nice.. :)

Shab-e-Hijar August 7, 2007, 5:27am 5

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bohat beautiful :k:

AQ August 7, 2007, 5:31am 6

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very touching… I liked the metaphors used in the last two lines… :k:

Amjad Islam Amjad kaa style lagtaa hai… shaair kaa naam bhee bata daiN taakaY agar ghalat fehmi ho tau duur ho jaaYe

Shab-e-Hijar August 7, 2007, 5:42am 7

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shair ka naam bun gaya hai
AQ ka takiya kalam

AQ August 7, 2007, 5:54am 8

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araY bhai… pooraY “aik” number kee baat hai

Shab-e-Hijar August 7, 2007, 5:59am 9

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hahahaha

haan ye to hai lakin idhar to maaf kardain na

AQ August 7, 2007, 6:04am 10

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actually it is good to give credit where it is due if we know

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 6:13am 11

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Thanks all :)

I always try to find the poet name but sometime source per available nahin hota any way i am sure (writing style ) this one is by AIA :)

SJ August 7, 2007, 8:07am 12

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Its Really Beautiful Poem.............N My All time Fav As Well....:)

deep_ocean August 7, 2007, 8:29am 13

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thanks Soniaa_jee :)

Prince_Ali August 7, 2007, 5:17pm 14

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buhut khub :k:

Daanie August 8, 2007, 11:51am 15

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buhut khoob :)

tum_bin_1 August 10, 2007, 5:10pm 16

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Very Nice :)