Maqta bee aik damm jhakaaas! bolaY tau aakhri line tau buss lagtaa hai kissi baRaY shaair saY udhaar lee hai laikin fit aisaY aayee hai jaisaY aNgooThi maiN nageenaa… just like other sho’ara do that..
tell me who else is there who read me more than I express myself, except one and only Anwaar Qureshi
bolay to yeh ‘maqta’ kia hota ? (sachi nai pata)
ooh… could be aakhri shayr ( yeh sochtay howay Farooq nay Farzaana ki ‘laat’ par aik zor daar ghoonsa maara… and Farzaana nay Farooq ko ‘do-laati’ maardi … oops patri say utar gaya, edit kardaina dyrector saab)
haan last line, wo na … jo shair saab nay iss jaisi line likhi thi, wo bohat baray bhaagtay chor thay, jinhonay meray zehan say idea chura lia, meray likhnay say bhi pehlay
Buhat Umda AtA just great bas aik shyr ki mazeed perody mery zehan main bhi ai hy mulahza frmaiy ap or Asal shair donon sy muazrat ky sath:D
Unn kay aanay say jo aati hay chehray pay mazeed phitkaar Wo samjh jaatay hain kay taqazay qarz ka moqa acha hay
torch nahi to mom batti say hi roshni daaliyay kay itti hansi q ayi
Ahem … ( galay main khich khich x 2… kia karoon… )
Bows… thankoo thankoo may’m …
hehe waisay to be honest I had the same idea about the qarz khuwah, but then I wrote what is written …
Actually the whole idea of this ghazal was that maqta… hehe so had to be like that, …
lekin aap ka shayr classic hay, lagta hay aap main bhi mizaah kay jarsoomay koot koot kar bharay howay hain … hmm… khoob guzraygi jab mil baithaingay namoonay do …
ps: thank you so much for opening thread for me in cafe for BD… and thats something that made my day and made me feel to come and write this on GS… credit goes to you only…
**PS2all:
**I gtg now, later guys, good luck and thank you again … going for pait pooja, agar kisi nay cake khaana hay to ajaain… kuch nahi kaha jaiga :-p
jall tu jalaal tu ... ayi bala ko bhi taal tu ahem ;-)
tell me who else is there who read me more than I express myself, except one and only Anwaar Qureshi :-)
bolay to yeh 'maqta' kia hota ? :$ (sachi nai pata)
ooh... could be aakhri shayr ( yeh sochtay howay Farooq nay Farzaana ki 'laat' par aik zor daar ghoonsa maara... and Farzaana nay Farooq ko 'do-laati' maardi ... oops patri say utar gaya, edit kardaina dyrector saab)
haan last line, wo na ... jo shair saab nay iss jaisi line likhi thi, wo bohat baray bhaagtay chor thay, jinhonay meray zehan say idea chura lia, meray likhnay say bhi pehlay ;-)
ps: araams ay doobara parhna, sukoon say ;-)
Sukoon muhal hy qudrat ky karkhany main or khas tor pr kam, kam or sirf kam main busy Anno ko:D
laikin fit aisaY aayee hai jaisaY aNgooThi maiN nageenaa… just like other sho’ara do that..
(sachi nai pata)
just great bas aik shyr ki mazeed perody mery zehan main bhi ai hy mulahza frmaiy ap or Asal shair donon sy muazrat ky sath:D
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