Faraar

Amal · June 9, 2005, 1:02am

Faraar was written a few months ago and as per my knack of writing long poems, this one also has four long parts. And knowing that there aren’t many takers for poems here, I am posting only two of them for I do not want to lose any of my fans. Bear with me guys :~)

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Faraar

Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
jahaN koi dukh na koi dard na hi pachtaawa koi
dabey paaoN mera peecha karey ya saath chaley
kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
na to sun’ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
kisi toot’tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
ya terey aaNchal sey bichrra huwa koi maasoom khayaal
merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap’thapaata rahooN!

Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
jahaN koi raah, na parwaah na kisi manzil ki chaah
na koi aas na koi yaas na koi maanoos sadaa
na koi baagh na basti na koi kheit na sehra
na kaheiN gheiroN ka jhurmat na koi apnoN ka dera
na koi raat na doopehar na koi shaam na savera
na kisi saey ki tamanna chahey wo aaNchal ho tera
jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap’thapaata rahooN!

By: Amal

NikamiJano · June 9, 2005, 2:38am

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Faraar

Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
jahaN koi dukh na koi dard na hi pachtaawa koi
dabey paaoN mera peecha karey ya saath chaley
kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
na to sun’ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
kisi toot’tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
ya terey aaNchal sey bichrra huwa koi maasoom khayaal
merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap’thapaata rahooN!

Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
jahaN koi raah, na parwaah na kisi manzil ki chaah
na koi aas na koi yaas na koi maanoos sadaa
na koi baagh na basti na koi kheit na sehra
na kaheiN gheiroN ka jhurmat na koi apnoN ka dera
na koi raat na doopehar na koi shaam na savera
na kisi saey ki tamanna chahey wo aaNchal ho tera
jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap’thapaata rahooN!

By: Amal
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Beautiful Aymal

kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
na to sun’ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
kisi toot’tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley:k:

Golden_Scorpion_1 · June 9, 2005, 4:37am

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Beautiful…

Now Waiting for Two More

system · June 9, 2005, 10:22am

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It's lovely as usual... Really love the way you put words together... :-)

Now post the other two parts as well :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · June 9, 2005, 11:15am

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Beautiful poem Amal keep it up

Shab-e-Hijar · June 12, 2005, 6:51pm

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beautifulllll amal :k:

ps
mujhy bhi asi hi jaga ki talash hai

Azad · June 13, 2005, 9:32am

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Maza Agia

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 13, 2005, 12:19pm

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Zabardast poem Amal, can i post the other one?:~)

Amal · June 13, 2005, 2:35pm

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NikamiJi thanx for liking the peom despite the fact that you are not a 'nazm person' :~)

GS, KhamoshNigahein, do parts kaafi nahi kya? :~) Thanx for your appreciation.

HeArT HaCKeR, Shab-e-Hijar and Azad, nazm pasand karney ke leeye be'had shukriya :-)

Gul, no rights reserved, do anything you like :~)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 14, 2005, 1:24pm

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its mean ijazat nahin hay:-(

Amal · June 15, 2005, 4:10pm

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I said "no rights reserved" ... matlab ke khuli ijaazat hey ... how come you got it all wrong? :(

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 16, 2005, 11:47am

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tou yoon kahna thaa naa seedhi tarhaaN:~) english mujhay achi nahin lagtii:p

Dilsay · June 16, 2005, 2:59pm

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Very nice .... Aur khush rahain

system · June 16, 2005, 7:00pm

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Beautiful :k::k:

Rameesha · June 16, 2005, 8:49pm

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Amal:

Faraar

Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
jahaN koi dukh na koi dard na hi pachtaawa koi
dabey paaoN mera peecha karey ya saath chaley
kisi dam torrtey huwey khaab ki koi aah-o-baka
na to sun’ney meiN aaey aur na hi aaNkhoN meiN
kisi toot’tey huwey taarey ka koi aks paley
ya terey aaNchal sey bichrra huwa koi maasoom khayaal
merey paas aa ke beyn karey shaam dhaley
jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap’thapaata rahooN!

Door kaheiN door kisi aesi jaga
jahaN koi raah, na parwaah na kisi manzil ki chaah
na koi aas na koi yaas na koi maanoos sadaa
na koi baagh na basti na koi kheit na sehra
na kaheiN gheiroN ka jhurmat na koi apnoN ka dera
na koi raat na doopehar na koi shaam na savera
na kisi saey ki tamanna chahey wo aaNchal ho tera
jahaaN meiN apney aap ko apni hi baahoN meiN leeye
beittha rahooN, sehlaata rahooN, thap’thapaata rahooN!

By: Amal

awwww its simply beautiful Amal ji :k: just amazing… i’m waiting for the rest of 2parts..

btw I’m feeling the same way these days, aisi hi kissi jaga pe muje bhi jana he, maloom ho to bataye?..

_Masoom_Muskaan · June 17, 2005, 11:30am

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very nice amal bhae merei sei nei bolna okk

Amal · June 17, 2005, 1:36pm

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Dilsay and * Vivacious *, thanx for liking the poem :~)

Gul, finally you got it :~)

Rameesha Ji, nice to see you after a long gap...nazm pasand karne ke leeye shukriya...aesi koi jaga abhi tak to daryaaft nahi hui, pataa chala to aap ko zaroor bataaooN ga :) Agley 2 parts bhi jald mil jaeiN ge aap ko, lekin post shaed koi aur karey ga :~)

Masoom Muskaan, arey meri chotti si behna ko kya huwa? Kis baat pe gussa hey ye to bata do na. Pataa hey naaraaz hona buri baat hoti hey... :(

Faraar

NikamiJi thanx for liking the peom despite the fact that you are not a 'nazm person' :~)

GS, KhamoshNigahein, do parts kaafi nahi kya? :~) Thanx for your appreciation.

HeArT HaCKeR, Shab-e-Hijar and Azad, nazm pasand karney ke leeye be'had shukriya :-)

Dilsay and ***** Vivacious *****, thanx for liking the poem :~)

Gul, finally you got it :~)

*Rameesha Ji, * nice to see you after a long gap...nazm pasand karne ke leeye shukriya...aesi koi jaga abhi tak to daryaaft nahi hui, pataa chala to aap ko zaroor bataaooN ga :) Agley 2 parts bhi jald mil jaeiN ge aap ko, lekin post shaed koi aur karey ga :~)

Dilsay and * Vivacious *, thanx for liking the poem :~)

Rameesha Ji, nice to see you after a long gap...nazm pasand karne ke leeye shukriya...aesi koi jaga abhi tak to daryaaft nahi hui, pataa chala to aap ko zaroor bataaooN ga :) Agley 2 parts bhi jald mil jaeiN ge aap ko, lekin post shaed koi aur karey ga :~)