Falak be'chein rehta hey hawaa ghamgeen rehti hey

Amal · July 17, 2011, 2:29pm

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Falak be’chein rehta hey hawaa ghamgeen rehti hey
dhanak ke toot jaaney par fiza ghamgeen rehti hey

lehad ka peyt bharney ko wo saaNseiN loot leti hey
magar phir deir tak shaed qaza ghamgeen rehti hey

kabhi aaNkheiN bohat kuch keh to deti heiN magar phir bhi
samaa’at tak na pohNchey jo, sada ghamgeen rehti hey

mohabbat sey taraashey khaab aksar toot jaaney par
muraadoN ke mazaaroN par duwa ghamgeen rehti hey

khizaaN meiN bhi chaman sey yuN to milti roz hey lekin
bahaaroN ke palatney tak saba ghamgeen rehti hey

taqaaza hey ye qudrat ka jo karni hey so bharni hey
magar na’haq miley to phir saza ghamgeen rehti hey**

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kantuta · July 17, 2011, 2:32pm

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Koyal · July 17, 2011, 2:35pm

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Amal bohat he khubsurat gazal hai saRi ki saRi

deadsoul · July 17, 2011, 2:36pm

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buhat khob amal
buhat he umdaa ghazal likhi hai ap nay
bht kuch samitay huay khud me

Amal · July 17, 2011, 2:42pm

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Thanx guys :)

LP · July 17, 2011, 3:07pm

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Beautifullllll

sfaseehrabbani · July 17, 2011, 4:19pm

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*Bohat khoob Amal bhai!
bohat umda bohat dilkash ghazal ataa ki hay aap ne,
dheroN daad aap ke liay iss iss rawaaN aur pur aCer ghazal par.
Sifr aik yeh miSra badal lijiay:
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سماعت تک جو نہ پہنچے، صدا غمگین رھتی ہے

کو

سماعت تک نہ پہنچے جو، صدا غمگین رھتی ہے

کر دیجیے
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Aap ka bohat shukria, hamesha khush rehiaye.**

Azad · July 17, 2011, 6:21pm

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Bechara Falak.

Amal · July 18, 2011, 2:06pm

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Hosla-afzaai ke leeye aap sab dostoN ka be'had shukriya :)

Faseeh bhai roman text meiN correction kar di hey, urdu image meiN baaqi hey. Aap ke mashwarey ke leeye be'had shukriya :)

Innocent_Smile · July 19, 2011, 3:55pm

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Amal boht khob. ghazal boht achi hai aur har aik sher dil ko acha laga :k:

Aryaan · July 22, 2011, 3:40am

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Bohat hi khoobsurat tehreer Amal..

_Masoom_Muskaan · July 22, 2011, 3:04pm

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v nice

jiia · July 22, 2011, 6:44pm

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bohat zabardast
bohat RAWANI hi lafzon mi MASHA ALLAH

Shazia_Arif · July 23, 2011, 3:04pm

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khoobsurat balkay bohat he khoobsurat.

diwana · July 24, 2011, 5:09am

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Good one.

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 24, 2011, 9:11am

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Beautiful .............. :) Keep it up Amal

punjabi_kuri_1 · July 25, 2011, 2:35pm

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mohabbat sey taraashey khaab aksar toot jaaney par
muraadoN ke mazaaroN par duwa ghamgeen rehti hey

awesome

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · August 1, 2011, 9:28pm

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Wahh wah bohat khoob ghazal kahi hai Amal.. zabardast.. :-)