faasale aise bhii honge ye kabhii sochaa na thaa
saamane baithaa thaa mere aur vo meraa na thaa
vo kisi Khushbuu kii tarah phailaa thaa mere chaar suu
mein usse mahasuus kar sakataa thaa chhuu sakataa na thaa
raat bhar us kii hii aahat kaan mein aatii rahii
jhaank kar dekhaa galii mein koii bhii aayaa na thaa
aks to maujuud thay par aks tanahai k thay
ainaa to thaa magar us mein teraa cheharaa na thaa
aaj us ne dard bhii apane alahadaa kar diye
aaj mein royaa to mere saath vo royaa na thaa
ye sabhii viiraaniyan us ke judaa hone se thein
aankh dhundhalaai hoi thi shahar dhundalaya na tha
yaad karake aur bhii takaliif hotii thii “Adeem”
bhuul jaane ke sivaa ab koi bhii chaara na tha
by : Adeem Hashmi
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
{aks to maujuud thay par aks tanahai k thay
ainaa to thaa magar us mein teraa cheharaa na thaa }
hmmm nice sharing thx keep sharing :)
Zamil
April 19, 2006, 8:37pm
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Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
faasale aise bhii honge ye kabhii sochaa na thaa
saamane baithaa thaa mere aur vo meraa na thaa
vo kisi Khushbuu kii tarah phailaa thaa mere chaar suu
mein usse mahasuus kar sakataa thaa chhuu sakataa na thaa
raat bhar us kii hii aahat kaan mein aatii rahii
jhaank kar dekhaa galii mein koii bhii aayaa na thaa
aks to maujuud thay par aks tanahai k thay
ainaa to thaa magar us mein teraa cheharaa na thaa
aaj us ne dard bhii apane alahadaa kar diye
aaj mein royaa to mere saath vo royaa na thaa
ye sabhii viiraaniyan us ke judaa hone se thein
aankh dhundhalaai hoi thi shahar dhundalaya na tha
yaad karake aur bhii takaliif hotii thii “Adeem”
bhuul jaane ke sivaa ab koi bhii chaara na tha
Ik Ik she’r motiyaan warga…
I mean…
**Ek ek she’r zabardast hai WooooW… **
**…sho shweeeeet Sana… **
Sannan
April 20, 2006, 3:00am
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Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
faasale aise bhii honge ye kabhii sochaa na thaa
saamane baithaa thaa mere aur vo meraa na thaa
vo kisi Khushbuu kii tarah phailaa thaa mere chaar suu
mein usse mahasuus kar sakataa thaa chhuu sakataa na thaa
raat bhar us kii hii aahat kaan mein aatii rahii
jhaank kar dekhaa galii mein koii bhii aayaa na thaa
aks to maujuud thay par aks tanahai k thay
ainaa to thaa magar us mein teraa cheharaa na thaa
aaj us ne dard bhii apane alahadaa kar diye
aaj mein royaa to mere saath vo royaa na thaa
ye sabhii viiraaniyan us ke judaa hone se thein
aankh dhundhalaai hoi thi shahar dhundalaya na tha
yaad karake aur bhii takaliif hotii thii “Adeem”
bhuul jaane ke sivaa ab koi bhii chaara na tha
by : Adeem Hashmi
This is one of my favorite ghazal … i’ll try to to make some image and write in urdu fonts …
anyway thx for sharing and keep it up
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
:k: very sweet
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
One of my favs. Good one. :k:
Parda
April 22, 2006, 8:42pm
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Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
mera bhi bohet fav, hai yeh poem, thanxx!
bohet achi!
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
thx to all for liking my colection:)
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
buhat khoob sana jee
thanks for sharing :k:
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
{bhuul jaane ke sivaa ab koi bhii chaara na tha}
Wah, wah, wah,
Dear Sana thank you for sharing such an emotional and captivating Ghazal.
Please keep sharing such wonderful thing.
Thanks
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
:)my pleasure.
Re: faasale aisay bhi hoon gay kabhi socha na tha
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