the white eyeshadow is not shimmery enough…try a more shimmery light colored eyeshadow (beige or silver) as a highlighter. Also blend the dark color from the outer corners of the eye towards the inside so it fades in. You have dark eyeshadow towards the inside of your crease which is making the eyes look harsh…u need to have a lighter shadow towards the inside and darker towards the outside to make the eye look bigger.