Express Your Patriotism!!

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Here it is :slight_smile:

https://soundcloud.com/lucid_gs/aye-meray-piaray-watan-6th

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amazing poem :slight_smile: Number 1 prize aap ko milna chaiye. Competition koi hai bhi nahi agar kisi ne kuch post kiya tab bhi :slight_smile: Def you should publish in urdu paper. Aur yahan pe mehrani se translation kijiye :slight_smile:

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main thoda credit lena chahongi koi ki maine idea thi poems ki but full credit to Lucid bhai and Queenji for setting this up :)

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Thankoo sweet behna :slight_smile: sara ka sara credit ap ka hay janab.. pasand karnay ka shukria aur prize denay ka double shukria.. :flowers: par jahan tak paper main bhejnay ka talluq hay, honestly its an amateurish attempt with many technical and grammatical flaws which I can sense but don’t have enough command to correct them. bus yaheen tak k liay theek hay :slight_smile:

PS: Translation PM main :stuck_out_tongue:

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acha shukriya sweet bhai :slight_smile: koi competition ho bhi nahi sakta. Agar aap chahein bhejna to zaroor accept karenge. even if you wanted to send to online papers ya english wale. sab appreciate karenge. great reminder for those far from home ke humein kuch karna chaiye hamare mulk ke liye aur un logon ki madad karni chaiye jo kam kar rahe hain :slight_smile: thank you for translation

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Lucid… awesome. I’m impressed. Well delivered and beautifully written. You deserve the Tamgha-e-Imtiaz :biggthumb:

keep it up & keep it coming!!

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Thank you thank you sistaa ji… itnay umdah alfaz main hosla afzai karnay ka behad shukria.. :slight_smile: par ek bat makhmasay main dalnay wali hay.. Tamgha-e-Imtiaz agar mujhay day dia to Imtiaz bechara kia karay ga? :confused: :cb:

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Simply awesome. Very nicely presented. :slight_smile:

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Yes Lucid bhai waqai awesome hain har way mein. I am proud to be his indian sister :)

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Thanks Bhai ji.. wo actually na, I took your signature too seriously, isi liay kuch guzaray layaq kaam hogaya :)

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:):):):)

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Good one. :hehe:

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Hakuna bhai i am waiting for your song. Aap Aug 14 2014 se pehle zaroor post kariye :P

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Lucid bhai lagta hai aur koi competition nahi hain aur aap winner ho gaye.
:@:

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very nice paa ji… chaa gaye oo THA kerke :biggthumb:

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hahahahahahahahahhahahahaahhahahahhahhaa :omg: :rotfl:

aray actually u know pehle me bilkul free tha to roz koi naa koi recording post ker deta tha… abhi itna busy hoon ke bas kya bataun… but mujhe jis din bhi moqa mila I will record and post it… :biggthumb:

aap bhi to kuch record kerke post karein :smiley:

and I am expecting something Extra-Ordinary from Diwana Bhaiya and Southie Bhaiya :shoaby:

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i am sure diwana bhai will post something.

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