explanation needed--another faraz shair

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 6:32pm

Tha jinhain zoam woo darya bhi mujhi may dobay
may k sehra nazar ata tha samunder nikla…

Thanks

achi si explanation chahiyay…lets brain storm what faraz meant in this shair…

LP · June 23, 2013, 6:35pm

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Zoam ka meaning ?

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 6:39pm

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jinhain fakhar tha, gharoor tha, bari aakaar thi.... :)

LP · June 23, 2013, 6:43pm

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Ok shayeri mere sur k uper se guzer gaye phir

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 6:45pm

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tumhay ghoor karna chahiyay k is shair may sehra ka kiya matlab hai or samunder ka kiya matlab hai…share here what u understand by reading these two words in shair

LP · June 23, 2013, 6:52pm

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Sehra : devoid of something
Samunder : filled with something

Now I dont know wht tht something cud be .

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 6:58pm

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sehra means jahan pay aap ko kuch na milay...sehra may sarab bhi nazar atay hain jo nazar kaa dhoka hotay hain...aap k hont piyasay bhi rehtay hain...rait k telon ki bhool bhulaiyaan bhi hoti hain....

samunder means jo oper say pur sakoon andar say talatum khaiz hota hai...kabhi oper tofan bhi atay hain...us k senay may mukhtalif zamano ki kahain or mukhtalif kisam k raaz bhi chupay hotay hain....jisay k hum jitna andar jayein woo utna he gehra hota jata hai...utnay he us ki gehrai may raaz chupay hotay hain...jo nazar bhi ata hai or chupa howa bhi hota hai

now can u explain this shair :) ?

LP · June 23, 2013, 7:03pm

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Maine 8 words mai summarize kr diya jo apne 2 paragraphs mai likha

Nopes I still didn’t get the exact meaning of the sher.

Now you tell wht you understood from the sher.

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 7:10pm

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jab shairi ki wazahaat kartay hain tu phir summary may nahi baayan kartay shair ko…phir us ko har rang ka libas or har lafaz ka zewaar pehnaya jata hai…ta k us ka har rang har pehlu har khusbo or har mehak ka ahsas or asar dil par hoo…jis ki explanation parh k dil bay qarar or rooh sarshar ho jayee…nahi tu phir shaiiri parhnay ka koi faida nahi…waqati lafazi ko enjoy karna shairi k sath insaf nahi

muqawwee123 · June 23, 2013, 7:11pm

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Matlab ghareeb ki lottery lag gai Karoron ki.. aur Lakh pati rishtedaar jo uske kakh pati hote huwe poochte bhi na the, wo uske ird gird mandlane lage

LP · June 23, 2013, 7:13pm

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ye krna subke bus k baat nahi :no:

Tubhi i said…summary likhi honi chahiye

LP · June 23, 2013, 7:14pm

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Kach pati means ?

Han aisa hota hai...loog aas paas mandlane lagte hain.

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 7:15pm

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i think muqa nay kakh pati likhna tha woo kach pati likh gaya....am i write muqa?

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 7:16pm

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ok muqa, any serious explanation?

LP · June 23, 2013, 7:16pm

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And kakh pati means ?

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 7:20pm

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jis k paas kakh bhi na hooo...matlab kuch bhi na hooo......

LP · June 23, 2013, 7:23pm

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hmm..ok

muqawwee123 · June 23, 2013, 7:26pm

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yes you are right its kakh pati ( ghareeb / muflis).

Mujhe ye shair padh ke yehi scenario click huwa hai ke kabhi yun hota hai ke log kisi ke ander chupa huwa talent (johar) nahin pehchaan paate aur jab us shakhs ka waqt aata hai uska johar khulta hai to wohi log uske peeche ghoomte hain. Gharoor ka sir neecha.

aur kabhi yun bhi hota hai ke insaan apne aap k ander salahiyaton ko sahi pehchaan nahin pata chalta aur wo thode main khush hojata hai.. jaise Iqbal ne kaha tha:

Tu Hi Nadaan Chand Kaliyon Par Qinaat Kar Gya
Warna Gulshan Mein Alaj-e-Tangi-e-Damaan Bhi Hai

so jab insaan per apni salahiyaten aashkar hoti hain to usse pata chalta hai ke us ne kia loose kia.

cutenice62 · June 23, 2013, 7:32pm

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hmmm…aik word darya ko bhi understand karain yahan…or darya..samunder or sehra ka relationship kiya ho sakta hai?

or is explanation may mohabat ka touch bhi dain …

LP · June 23, 2013, 7:37pm

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sarey sher mohabbat se related nai hotay