...Eulogy of a Watch...

This poem was written by my little sister. She’s in middle school. This poem won the local contest among all schools and now she’ll enter the National Contest.

Eulogy of a Watch

**I went to the store one day, **
And I saw you there -
How fragile, precious, and just so beautiful you looked.
I just wanted you to be mine,
So I bought you.


**You told me when it was, **
You told me exactly.
Sometimes you drove me crazy,
But I held on to you,
Or you held on to me!


You moved every second,
You moved every minute,
And you moved every hour.
Tick Tock! Tick Tock! Tick Tock!
You went on and on and on.


But one day, you stopped there,
And I just stalled there,
Waiting to hear another Tick Tock!
I just thought of all the moments,
All of the seconds, minutes, and hours that you gave me!

My sister, A middle school student

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:0 what`s her age?!?! ..

I just thought of all the moments,
All of the seconds, minutes, and hours that you gave me!

beautiful .. :k: .. tell her to keep writing .. :kiss: .. would love to read more of her stuff ..

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Thanks :)

Will tell her. She sometimes comes on gupshup and checks out threads. I am sure she'll check this one too.

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Wonderful.. and the words used are great...

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Aaaw :frowning: That’s so sad :teary1:. Yea sometimes I get free watches out the cereal box and those things usually don’t run for about more than a month. :frowning: sigh

Hahah. Omg I still can’t get over the fact that you have a little sister. :smack: :hehe: Woa. Your brother is way too cute to be a girl’s bhai :eek:

:hehe:

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^ :smack:

Thanks both Phatima and Dilsay.

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Beautiful shik....:) chalain ap k bro sisters main koi tu itna talented hai :p

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its pretty deep .. :k: ..

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Thanks on her behalf Koyal jee :slight_smile: Jee, sirf aik mein hi nikamma nikal aaya :bummer:

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Hay Lil Sis :slight_smile:

Very Nice… U r Good… So Keep on Writing :flower1: