etna gahra tha rang-e-hina oos ki hatheli par

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Etna gahra tha rang-e-hina oos ki hatheli par
Mere naam ki lakeer oos meiN kahiN kho gayee
Main bhatakta raha apni taqdeer ki talaash mein
Aur meri taqdeer mujhe dhooNdhate dhooNDhate so gayee

Wo rang chha gaye meri ankhoN meiN baadloN ki tarah
Mere zazbaat ashqoN meiN badal gaye
Mere ehsaas ne dhaal diya enheiN boondoN meiN
aur kal shab eik saba ke jhonKe mein bah gaye

haN ! magar rang tha oosi hina ka
jo meri taqdeer ko kha gayee
aur aaj lahoo ban ke
meri aankhoN ko rula gayee.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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Beautiful Pramod

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

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Nice..

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~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

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Thanks Amal, uff and Kinara.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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Pramod

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zabardast

Is that yours?

  • MuN laa kehNa saiaaN da..
    Ghhooom jaa..
    Jhooom ja..*
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Thanks juMura. Yes ! it is mine. emotions of some day…

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*

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Thanks Chand ji.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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kya khoob likha hai....

Koi to ho jo mere wehshatooN ka saathe ho

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very nice
sunaane ke liye shukriya

**bhaRhe* chalo ke tajasus kaa naam iimaa'N hai*

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Thanks ASA.
Shukriya mareez-e-ishq.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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talaash karte huway ungaliyaan jalaa Daaliin
woh teyragee thee keh main shama bhe na dekh sakaa

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Thanks armughal.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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Sooo Nice ...

سكورپین کنگ
§©ö®Þïoñ_kîñg

Even If You Are Basically Stupid
You Can Still Meet Nice People !

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Thanks, Speed M.

Baza ye zabt-e-gham phir bhi,mohabbat meiN kabhi ro ley
Dabaane ke liye har dard, ye naadaN nahiN hota.

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[quote]
Originally posted by Pramod:
**Etna gahra tha rang-e-hina oos ki hatheli par
Mere naam ki lakeer oos meiN kahiN kho gayee

Wo rang chha gaye meri ankhoN meiN baadloN ki tarah

haN ! magar rang tha oosi hina ka
jo meri taqdeer ko kha gayee
aur aaj lahoo ban ke
meri aankhoN ko rula gayee.

**
[/quote]

Beautiful.

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

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Pramod aap ko bohat bohat mubaarak ho

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…you really deserved it

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Keep it up

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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

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phiRa aj haq kaliye jaa’N fida karay koi
wafa bhi jhooM uthay yo wafa karay koi
nimaaZ 14 sadi se hai muntaziR logo|
HussaiN ke tarha aye ada karay koi
~~~~~~~~~

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~*