another one, please tell me how you rate my efforts.
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WeeraniyaaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad
MehroomiyaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad
Phela hua ab to chaar soo andhera hai
TareekiyaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad
Be ronaq meri tarah ghar ke dar-o-deewaar bhi hain
UdaasiyaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad
Dhaltey sooraj, taptey sehra aur khizan raseeda paton se
ShanasayaaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad
Hotey hain har taraf se ab ishaarey meri janib
RuswayaaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad
Dar khula rakhtey hain ke shayid too aye kabhi
Khush fehmiyaaN muqaddar bani ek terey janey ke baad *
