EK TAAZA GHAZAL PESH HAI......

andha_qanoon · January 18, 2002, 6:45pm

Ek taaza ghazal pesh hai ,tawajjah chahunga…

MERE HOTHON SE TABASSUM HAI JUDA YAARO
HABIBON NE DI HAI MUHABBAT KI SAZAA YAARO

MERE GHAR KO JALANE SE KYA MILA USKO
KUON RAH-E-INSAANIYAT SE WOH BHATAK GYA YAARO

DARD-E-DIL SUNNANE KE HAIN ANDAAZ ALAG APNE
MERe GUNGUNANE KI SUN LO TUM SADA YAARO

MAI HI RAHI,MAI HI REHBAR,MAI HI MANZIL
AKELE AADMI KA HAI YEH QAAFILA YAARO

Thanks for ur patience..

Jiyo Aur Jeene Do!!!

[This message has been edited by andha_qanoon (edited January 18, 2002).]

Amal · January 18, 2002, 7:20pm

Beautiful A-Q

MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN…

andha_qanoon · January 18, 2002, 7:29pm

thanks yaar..khud se likha hai… chorinahi ki hai

Sahiba · January 18, 2002, 7:36pm

~galat nahi k zamanaY maiN lajwab haiN hum
jisay samaj na sakaY koi wo ek kitab haiN hum~

andha_qanoon · January 18, 2002, 8:16pm

Shukriya Jee!!!

Akif_zeb_1 · January 18, 2002, 9:53pm

waah jannab kya baat hai.. bohat khoob.. keep it up man…

mairay dill mairay mussafir

andha_qanoon · January 18, 2002, 9:56pm

thanks Akif Uncle( Iassued u r an Uncle by looking at your pic )…I am sorry If I am wrong

Sehar · January 18, 2002, 10:14pm

andha_qanoon

great to have you here, and a nice ghazal

aur aapko ye batana tha ke, aainda please lower caps mein post kijiye ga.

shukriya

MAREEZ_E_ISHQ · January 18, 2002, 10:18pm

Wah kiaa baat hai buhat khube.
aur bhi sunaaiye gaa.

wAfaa sho_haaR kahee hain koi has*EE*'n bhi to ho*^*
chalo phiR aaj uSsi be_wAfaa kii baat karei*N*^

andha_qanoon · January 18, 2002, 10:18pm

Ok..Seher Ur point well taken

chand_chehra · January 19, 2002, 8:38am

very nice A Q ge

keep it up

~~Experience is the worst teacher; it gives the test before presenting the lesson.~~

andha_qanoon · January 19, 2002, 8:41am

shukriya Chand Jee!!!!

Jiyo Aur Jeene Do!!!