Ek sher!!!!!

~~** Ana ki kaid se niklay mukabla to kare

Woh mera saath nibhaney ka hosla to kare

Kabhi na tootnay wala hissaar bun jaoon

Woh meri zaat mein rehne ka faisla to kare**~~

nice

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Why is this poetry section too slow these days

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One more thing: Does anyone know who’s sher is the one I posted?

bohat khobsuret. very nice

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sorry don’t know about the poet.


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

[This message has been edited by Mahee (edited March 31, 2002).]

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Originally posted by &Passionate:
~~ Ana ki kaid se niklay mukabla to kare

Woh mera saath nibhaney ka hosla to kare

Kabhi na tootnay wala hissaar bun jaoon

Woh meri zaat mein rehne ka faisla to kare*~~*
[/quote]

bohat khoob!... very nice...

sorry poet ka nahin pata... but woh ghazal yaad aa gaee - tum se ulfat ke taqaazay na nibaahay jaatay, warna hum ko bhi tamanna thee, keh chaahay jaatay.

aur yeh keh

gard-e ayyaam ki tehreer ko dhonay ke liyay
tum se goyaa hoN dum-deed jo meree pulkeiN
tum jo chaaho toh suno, aur na chaho, na suno
aur jo sarf gurezaaN kareiN aankheiN mujh se
tum jo chaho toh kaho, aur jo chaho, na kaho.


zindagi zinda billi ka naam hae...!

Nice

Thanx

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