Ek Sher

aabla_pa · April 19, 2007, 9:15am

shikwa-e-zulmat-e-shab se to kahin behtar tha
apnay hissay ki koi shamma jalaatay jaatay

Jhanjharewali · April 19, 2007, 12:02pm

Re: Ek Sher

zulmat kade mei mere shab-e-gham ka josh hei
ik shamma jal rahi hei so vo bhi udaas hei

aabla_pa · April 19, 2007, 12:49pm

Re: Ek Sher

plzzzzzzzzz Ghalib ki ruh par rehem karein :)

zulmat-kaday meiN mere shab-e-Gham ka josh hai
ik shamma'a hai daleel-e-sahar, so KHamosh hai

daaGH-e-firaaq-e-sohabat-e-shab kee jalee hooee
ik shamma`a reh gaee hai so wo bhee KHamosh hai

Jhanjharewali · April 19, 2007, 1:09pm

Re: Ek Sher

hahahaa.....aur baadaam khaungi mei!!
any chance i can delete my post??:D

aabla_pa · April 19, 2007, 2:28pm

Re: Ek Sher

^^

Chupa Saktay Hain Or Na Hum Dikha Saktay Hain Logon Ko
Kuch Aisay Daagh Hain Dil Per Jo Hum Dhoo Bhi Nahi Saktay

Jhanjharewali · April 20, 2007, 8:43am

Re: Ek Sher

**waese ik aur baat ho sakti hei…shayad meine ghalib ki nahi, magar khud ki sher banaiy hogee toh? **

deep_ocean · April 20, 2007, 10:27am

Re: Ek Sher

[QUOTE

zulmat-kaday meiN mere shab-e-Gham ka josh hai
ik shamma'a hai daleel-e-sahar, so KHamosh hai

daaGH-e-firaaq-e-sohabat-e-shab kee jalee hooee
ik shamma`a reh gaee hai so wo bhee KHamosh hai[/QUOTE]

Very beautiful

Addie · April 22, 2007, 10:43am

Re: Ek Sher

Machis ghar bhool aya.. (just kidding) very nice shair mujhay bhi bohat pasand hai