i like this ghazal alot
mera kya tha tere hisaab mein
mera saans saans udhaar tha,
jo guzar gaya wo to waqt tha
jo bachaa raha wo Gubaar tha
teri arzoo mein uri to thi
chand khushk pattey chanaar key,
jo hawa key dosh se gir gaye
unmein aik ye khaksaar tha
baray suufiyon se khayaal they
aur bayan bhi uska kamaal tha
mainay kab kaha ki walii tha woh
ek shaks tha, baada-Khwaar tha!
(Gulzar sahab aur Ghulam Ali sahab ke ‘visaal’ ki ghazal)
Zabardast lamhayg
app ke choice ke liye daad
woh kehtay hain na
Ghar ap he jagmaga othay ga
dehleez pa ik kadam bahot hae
mil jae agar tere rifaqat
mugh ko tu yahe janum bahot hae
thanks munir ji nawazish ap ki :)
khubsoorat:k:
nice one ..thanks 4 sharin .....Lamhay g..lagta hia aj ap k pass kafi fursat hia jo purani sari gazalin bahar la rehi ap ;)
PS: kuch Nikami ki be gazalin hain jis per ap ka autograph nahi hai hum tu kahtey hain lagay hathon ko ko be sharaf bakhsh he dain ap :).keep smilling
Good choice !
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*Originally posted by NikamiJano: *
nice one ..thanks 4 sharin .....Lamhay g..lagta hia aj ap k pass kafi fursat hia jo purani sari gazalin bahar la rehi ap ;)
PS: kuch Nikami ki be gazalin hain jis per ap ka autograph nahi hai hum tu kahtey hain lagay hathon ko ko be sharaf bakhsh he dain ap :).keep smilling
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o yaar aisi baat tu na karoo y not sure sure aaj kafi fursaat thee tussi apni dost jo thehri ;)
aur tumhari posting tu gr8 hoti hai
anyways thanks nikami siso and arifji
Re: ek shaks tha …!
very nice:k:
nice :k:
Re: ek shaks tha ...!
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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
i like this ghazal alot
mera kya tha tere hisaab mein
mera saans saans udhaar tha,
jo guzar gaya wo to waqt tha
jo bachaa raha wo Gubaar tha
teri arzoo mein uri to thi
chand khushk pattey chanaar key,
jo hawa key dosh se gir gaye
unmein aik ye khaksaar tha
baray suufiyon se khayaal they
aur bayan bhi uska kamaal tha
mainay kab kaha ki walii tha woh
ek shaks tha, baada-Khwaar tha!
(Gulzar sahab aur Ghulam Ali sahab ke 'visaal' ki ghazal)
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bhooooooooooot AAla
very nice lamhay sis :k:
Re: ek shaks tha ...!
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*Originally posted by Lamhay: *
i like this ghazal alot
mera kya tha tere hisaab mein
mera saans saans udhaar tha,
jo guzar gaya wo to waqt tha
jo bachaa raha wo Gubaar tha
teri arzoo mein uri to thi
chand khushk pattey chanaar key,
jo hawa key dosh se gir gaye
unmein aik ye khaksaar tha
baray suufiyon se khayaal they
aur bayan bhi uska kamaal tha
mainay kab kaha ki walii tha woh
ek shaks tha, baada-Khwaar tha!
(Gulzar sahab aur Ghulam Ali sahab ke 'visaal' ki ghazal)
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Nice Thanks for sharing Lamhay sis
thanks Amalbhai,muskaan,chandoji,gul-e-tasbeehand heart hacker ji!
jabardus:k:
bhut khooobb :k:
:)thxs 4 sharing lamhay siso 
very nice lamhay :k:
very nice
keep posting:k:
very nice :k:
thanks nikki,jaan ji ,sabby,ghazal kis ki and guy brush ji :)