Ek shair

Saree duniya se door ho jaye
jo zara tere paas ho bethe

Re: Ek shair

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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Saree duniya se door ho jaye
jo zara tere paas ho bethe

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bethke dekhti rahon tujhe subah shaam
ik tere jane se pehle ik tere ane ke baad ;)

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*Originally posted by -=Janu Jia=-: *

bethke dekhti rahon tujhe subah shaam
ik tere jane se pehle ik tere ane ke baad ;)
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Raat yun dil mein teree khoee huee yaad aayee
jaise weerane mein chupke se bahaar aa jaye!

PS:- Allah ne dil ko takhleeq kia, aur is kee takmeel kisee aur ke haathon likhee!

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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Raat yun dil mein teree khoee huee yaad aayee
jaise weerane mein chupke se bahaar aa jaye!

PS:- Allah ne dil ko takhleeq kia, aur is kee takmeel kisee aur ke haathon likhee!
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Germian,hasretein nakami se jul jate hein,
hum chiraagh ki terhan shaam se jul jate hein

Shama julti he jo numaish ke lie....
Hum ushi ki aag me jul jate hein.

Jab bhi ata he mera naam tere naam ke saath
Jane kion log mere naam se jul jate hein.... .

dil Ke fasle ehsaas se kam hote hein .....

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*Originally posted by -=Janu Jia=-: *

Germian,hasretein nakami se jul jate hein,
hum chiraagh ki terhan shaam se jul jate hein

Shama julti he jo numaish ke lie....
Hum ushi ki aag me jul jate hein.

Jab bhi ata he mera naam tere naam ke saath
Jane kion log mere naam se jul jate hein.... .

dil Ke fasle ehsaas se kam hote hein .....
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Tera jamal nigahon mein le ke utha hoon
nikhar gayee hai fiza tere pairahan kee
naseem tere shabastaan se ho ke aayee hai
meree sahar mein mahak hai tere badan kee see

nice sher cap....:)

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*Originally posted by Paglee: *
nice sher cap....:)
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Aap ko kabhee kisee ne aisa shair mansoob kia hai? Agar kia hota to aap ko kaisa lagta?

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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Aap ko kabhee kisee ne aisa shair mansoob kia hai? Agar kia hota to aap ko kaisa lagta?
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hamra name dekh k be ye Q..?..:)

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*Originally posted by Paglee: *

hamra name dekh k be ye Q..?..:)
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I beg your forgiveness. I am really ashamed of myself. Please ignore my ignorance!!

:k:

simple n beuatiful :k:

thanks for sharing capri

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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Tera jamal nigahon mein le ke utha hoon
nikhar gayee hai fiza tere pairahan kee
naseem tere shabastaan se ho ke aayee hai
meree sahar mein mahak hai tere badan kee see
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Subah Uthi tera chehra ankhon meleke
ke chiraghan ki zeroorat nahi raat tak mujhe phir.

Aae ho khushi bunke meri zindagi me asse
Ke Jia ne kaha eh Zeest teri manzil agai. ;)

Re: Re: Ek shair

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*Originally posted by -=Janu Jia=-: *

bethke dekhti rahon tujhe subah shaam
ik tere jane se pehle ik tere ane ke baad ;)
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do he waqat guzaray hain hum par kathain
ak taray anay say pahlay ak taray janay kay baad

Re: Ek shair

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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Saree duniya se door ho jaye
jo zara tere paas ho bethe

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qabil-e-ghour-O-tanqeed baat yeh hay kay yeh jiss kay paas bhee beTTha jaa rahaa hay, woh khud lagta hay duniyaa say dooor beTTha hay; chunna chay uss kay paas jaanaa goyaa duniyaa say door jaanay kay mutaaradif hay :-d

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*Originally posted by Gadha: *
qabil-e-ghour-O-tanqeed baat yeh hay kay yeh jiss kay paas bhee beTTha jaa rahaa hay, woh khud lagta hay duniyaa say dooor beTTha hay; chunna chay uss kay paas jaanaa goyaa duniyaa say door jaanay kay mutaaradif hay :-d
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Andhay ko anhairay main barri door ki soojhi :D

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Uss zulf pay phabti shab-e-dejoor kee soojhi:snooty:

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:wink:

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ab iss :wink: ka matlab bhee bataa do:halo:

Re: Ek shair

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*Originally posted by Capricorn: *

Saree duniya se door ho jaye
jo zara tere paas ho bethe

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Wah.. So Lovely...

nice:k: