Poetry forum ki jumla doshezaoon ki nazar
toofaan kar raha tha mere azm ka tawaaf…
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duniya samajh rahi thi ke kashti bhanwar mein hai!
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~ Adaab ~
Poetry forum ki jumla doshezaoon ki nazar
toofaan kar raha tha mere azm ka tawaaf...
duniya samajh rahi thi ke kashti bhanwar mein hai!
~ Adaab ~
Kia shair maara hai in doshezoon k naam (Yehi mila tha?):p
Re: ek shair
Yaar impression bananey do 
You know first impression kitna important hota hia 
Yaar impression daalna he hai tou kuch is tarah k shair kaho in k liye:
Nazuki in k lab ki kia kahye
pankhari ik gulaab ki see hai
Meer in neem baaz aankhon main
saari masti sharaab ki see hai
wah ji very nice shair :)