ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**Es kainaat-e-muhabbat main ham misl-e-shams-o-qamar k hain
ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

main khud ko baich don pher bhe,main tujh ko pa nahi sakta
main aam sa hamesha hon,tu khaas sa musalsal hai

waqt-e-wisaal ki bhe ek aarzo adhori hai
ek aas se hamesha hai,ek khawaab sa musalsal hai

khata karoun ki qismat main jannat hoa nahi karti
main khata kaar azal ka hon,tu paarsa musalsal hai**

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

Hakeem Luqmaan se poochh ke bataauuNgaa kiuN k jo she'r aap ne likhaa hai vo technically saHeeH nahiiN hai...pahle saHeeH she'r raqam kareN phir ham apnii jaasoorii shur'u kareNge! :)

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

kya kya ghalti hai

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai


meter kii aur izaafii alfaaz.

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

:confused:

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

koi ghalate nahi hai ..app ko perhna nahi aata snooty

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

nice : )

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Re: ek raabta musalsal hai,ek faasla musalsal hai

:cb: