Koyal
June 23, 2009, 2:44am
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kabi nazreiN milane mein zamane beet jate haiN
kabi nazreiN churane mein zamane beet jate haiN
kisi ne ankh bhi kholi to sone ki nagri maiN
kisi ko ghar banane meiN zamane beet jate haiN
kabi kali seyah raatein humein pal pal ki lagti haiN
kabi ek pal bitane meiN zamane beet jate haiN
kabi khola ghar ka darwaza khaRi thi samne manzil
kabi manzil ko aane meiN zamane beet jate haiN
ek pal mein toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
wo rishtey Jo banane meiN zamane beet jate haiN
Ahmi
June 23, 2009, 3:17am
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Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
Nice kuku...
Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
nice1
seem
June 23, 2009, 10:24am
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Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
yup nice
Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
:k:
Sheal
June 23, 2009, 5:09pm
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Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
awesome koyal :k:
Koyal
June 24, 2009, 2:38am
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anghootha dekhanay ka thanks lonley
Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
ek pal mein toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
*wo rishtey Jo banane meiN zamane beet jate haiN
BOhat ahla
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Dua_G
June 24, 2009, 7:29pm
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Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
kisi ne ankh bhi kholi to sone ki nagri maiN
*kisi ko ghar banane meiN zamane beet jate haiN *
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Bohat khoob... lajawab. Bohat achi choice hai . thanks for sharing.
Re: ek pal meiN toot jate haiN umr bhar k wo rishtey
GOOD KOYAL
Koyal
June 28, 2009, 8:56pm
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kisi ne ankh bhi kholi to sone ki nagri maiN
kisi ko ghar banane meiN zamane beet jate haiN
Bohat khoob... lajawab. Bohat achi choice hai . thanks for sharing.
Thanks Dua g :)
Super...Amazing...Excellent...yeh sab alfaaz kam hai is behtareen ghazal ke liye!!!