Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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**In your nazm zindagi u said:

**‘zindagi say kabhi kuch chaha hi nahi
jo bhi chaha kabhi mila hi nahi’

Hey you are too young to think negative…

Here u go: just for you:cu2:

Ek he badal baras raha hay
Dukh ka badal …

**Saya door talak nahi hay
Koi nahi hay…

Mann ko meray aag laggi hay
Piyas nahi hay

Sub kuch meray pass hay
Per Ehsas Nahi hay!!!

**

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam…

have u sincerly written this for me or making fun of me?
its nice but i didnt really get the last line:bummer:

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

Calm down. I am not making fun of you. I did write it after reading the first 2 lines of your poem.

The last line means we all have nearly everything but we can't stop moaning 'coz we never realise and take things for granted. ReLaX NoW!

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam…

oh ok i have to be sure because apparently everyone is out to get me in this place:bummer: anyways thanks ur poem is good. and i understand now.

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

No worries.

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam…

Niceee

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

Thanks DJ ...

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

Wow fara zabardast...

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam…

nomi bhai mere naam hai:rotfl:

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

nice one!

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Re: Ek Nazm Aisha in Dubai k naam...

Thanks alot Noman and MW.