~Ek nakam si koshish~

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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challayin mubarak ho.. ap ka dost ap ke poem ke waja say 8 number par Aaya hai..mubarak..:k:

wasay bhooli ji ik bat batyin.. ap ke dost ne jo baqi poems likhi hain.. keya vo be ap he ke hain :wink:

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Bhooli Bisri: *
mein ne aj tak kabhi apni thread per apna reply post nahe keya per aj kar rahe hon coz its important.

At urdupoint my friend has shared my poetry and I think this is enough to clear the confusion.

sab ki pasandeedgi ka shukreya
Waslaam
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Humm nay aap say aik sawaal kiyaa thaa... shayad app nay tawajuh denaa munasib naa samjhaa:)

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bohot khub

bohot khub Bhooli Bisri jee :) ..bohot achi koshish hai balkey khubsurat koshish hai :) thank u for sharing

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Thanks for sharing!!!

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hummm
bahii such kia hai:konfused:

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hmmmm, acha tu aapko autographs chahian :stuck_out_tongue:
Wiasay hum hur kisi ko nahee detay, autograph, per itni zid hai aapki tu sochna paray ga. :nahnah:

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Re: Re: ~Ek nakam si koshish~

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*Originally posted by Gadha: *
I just need to understand the use of the underline word in the following quoted sher.... i do understand it but it has some literal meaning and am just interested in what you think of the meaning and what do u mean exactly by this in context of the sher itself as well as the poem....

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Yahaan zindagi ke zaeeqay se murad zindagi ki khushiyaan hain....

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Re: Re: Re: ~Ek nakam si koshish~

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Bhooli Bisri: *

Yahaan zindagi ke zaeeqay se murad zindagi ki khushiyaan hain....
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:~)

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I just read that ghazal in urdupoint and was impressed. Just as u say that one of your friend posted ur poetry in his name to I just wantto clarify here that Ausaf Shaikh is known to me and I know that he is a good poet himself so why wud he borrow ur poems?
Do u know Ausaf Shaikh?

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[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Capricorn: *
I just read that ghazal in urdupoint and was impressed. Just as u say that one of your friend posted ur poetry in his name to I just wantto clarify here that Ausaf Shaikh is known to me and I know that he is a good poet himself so why wud he borrow ur poems?
Do u know Ausaf Shaikh?
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hain ap jantey ho?

tu hamin us ka auto graph chaiey capri plzzz.....:p

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ohhhh tu ap be kiis ki gazal utha k lanya walay :eek: sooch k lana ap ko pata hia yahan k ulu aur dosrey birdeis bohat taiz hain wo na ho autograph ap ko laina paar jaiey ..:stuck_out_tongue:

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Koyal: do you think ke mein kisi ki ghazal utha ke lae hon? if yes, then meri pyari si behna, you are absolutely wrong...

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Aap ko autograph chahiye to mujh se lo,mein kisee aur se le ke naheen doonga :smokin:

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aray koyal ne aisa tu kisi reply main nahi kaha ap ko aisa keon laga hum tu ap se autograph mang rahay aur ap jo sab kah rahy unhin tu kuch nahi kaha aur jo mashoom autograph mang rehi usay he ulatttaaa
bhlaie ka zaman he nahi :teary3:…

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jo smoking kaartey un k auto khdu khaaran hotey wo koyal ko auto kia dain gain :stuck_out_tongue:

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Us ko aap achee lagtee hongeen na :blush:

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Smokers mufakkir hote hain :smokin: Aur mufakkir khatarnaak insaan :smiley:

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koyal male hai shaied isi leay :blush:

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i already know that dun have to tell me:hoonh: :snooty:

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Tum agar male ho to mein tumhein kioon jawab de raha hoon? :bummer: