ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par

chand_chehra · May 20, 2004, 11:10pm

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hontoo-n pay sahiloo-n ki tarha tishnagi rahi
main chup huwa to meri ana chekh’ti rahi

ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par
phir umr bhar hawa say meri dushmani rahi

sarkoo pay sard raat rahi meri humsafar
ankho main mery sath thakan jagti rahi

yadoo-n say khelti rahi tanhaye raat bhar
khushboo kay intazaar main shub bhegti rahi

woh lafz lafz mujh pay utarta raha shakeel
socho pay us kay naam ki takhti lagi rahi

Koyal · May 20, 2004, 11:28pm

Re: ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

hontoo-n pay sahiloo-n ki tarha tishnagi rahi
main chup huwa to meri ana chekh'ti rahi

ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par
phir umr bhar hawa say meri dushmani rahi

sarkoo pay sard raat rahi meri humsafar
ankho main mery sath thakan jagti rahi

yadoo-n say khelti rahi tanhaye raat bhar
khushboo kay intazaar main shub bhegti rahi

woh lafz lafz mujh pay utarta raha shakeel
socho pay us kay naam ki takhti lagi rahi
[/QUOTE]

beautiful...finally ap ko mil he ga'ee puri gazal..:)

zidee · May 20, 2004, 11:45pm

Re: ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par
phir umr bhar hawa say meri dushmani rahi
[/QUOTE]

beautiful !!!
i especially loved these lines

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 21, 2004, 3:20am

Re: ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par

two thumbz up:k:

ASA · May 21, 2004, 10:24am

ahaa… beautiful… one of my fav… :k:

HeArT_HaCKeR · May 21, 2004, 11:43am

Beautiful … :k:

koiDost · May 21, 2004, 12:37pm

Bohat Khoob C C :)

Pramod · May 21, 2004, 4:02pm

Every sher is beautiful..I just cannot pick any one.....

Thanks for sharing it ** Chand jii **

Daagh · May 21, 2004, 4:05pm

very beautiful Chand Chehra jee :)

system · May 23, 2004, 9:46am

ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par
phir umr bhar hawa say meri dushmani rahi

Beautiful :k:

cuteepie · May 23, 2004, 3:40pm

beautiful :k:

Man_of_Courage · May 23, 2004, 5:26pm

beautiful

High-Tech · May 24, 2004, 4:01am

Re: ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by chand_chehra: *

hontoo-n pay sahiloo-n ki tarha tishnagi rahi
main chup huwa to meri ana chekh'ti rahi

ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par
phir umr bhar hawa say meri dushmani rahi

sarkoo pay sard raat rahi meri humsafar
ankho main mery sath thakan jagti rahi

yadoo-n say khelti rahi tanhaye raat bhar
khushboo kay intazaar main shub bhegti rahi

woh lafz lafz mujh pay utarta raha shakeel
socho pay us kay naam ki takhti lagi rahi
[/QUOTE]

Simply amazing :)

chand_chehra · May 24, 2004, 4:18am

Re: Re: ek naam kya likha tera sahil ki rait par

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Koyal: *

beautiful...finally ap ko mil he ga'ee puri gazal..:)
[/QUOTE]

dhondny say to khuda bhi miljata hai ye to ghazal thi :D

chand_chehra · May 24, 2004, 4:18am

thanks all

chand_chehra · May 24, 2004, 4:19am

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