Sannan
October 5, 2009, 9:30am
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**AOA,
I was just reading my threads and got Mr. ** **Hashmat Usmani comments that i should post my Kalam one by one so i’m presenting my first poem here with the image which i prepared myself … Hope you will like it … **
Ek Mukhtasar Mulaqat
Sadeon Say Lambi Bat
Phir Hamaisha Ka Firaq
Kia Tumhain Yaad Hay!
http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/2da4551119.jpg
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v nice image & lines.
Sannan
October 6, 2009, 12:06pm
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thanks shazia for liking poetry and my work ....
LP
October 8, 2009, 1:34am
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Aryaan
October 12, 2009, 2:47am
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Beautiful Words & Presentation Sannan ..:k:
Sannan
October 13, 2009, 3:32am
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Thx LP & Aryaan
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love itttt
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wow bhai............ its nice but i prefer commenting with some beautiful words to add more flavors to your poetry !!!!!!!
**AOA,
I was just reading my threads and got Mr. ** **Hashmat Usmani comments that i should post my Kalam one by one so i’m presenting my first poem here with the image which i prepared myself … Hope you will like it … **
Ek Mukhtasar Mulaqat
Sadeon Say Lambi Bat
Phir Hamaisha Ka Firaq
Kia Tumhain Yaad Hay!
http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/2da4551119.jpg
Hamen chaman ne hamesha sayaad he maana
Ye jantay hain k, jachtay nahi hain kaliyon main
Chand bikhri huvee yaadon ka sahaara lay kar
Laut aain gay, kisi roze inhee galiyon main
Sannan
May 24, 2010, 5:53am
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Thanks BM ur sharing poetry is also really cool
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bht nyc sannan
keep it up
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samaj nahi aya
main b akk shair kahoon ?
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sure mountains shoot !!!!!!!
dard1
June 29, 2010, 10:23am
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nice BM n Sannan
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its heart touching..