~*~Ek Mukhtasar Mulaqat ~*~

**AOA,

I was just reading my threads and got Mr. ** **Hashmat Usmani comments that i should post my Kalam one by one so i’m presenting my first poem here with the image which i prepared myself … Hope you will like it … **

Ek Mukhtasar Mulaqat
Sadeon Say Lambi Bat
Phir Hamaisha Ka Firaq
Kia Tumhain Yaad Hay!

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v nice image & lines.

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thanks shazia for liking poetry and my work ....

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:lajawab:

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Beautiful Words & Presentation Sannan..:k:

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Thx LP & Aryaan

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love itttt

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wow bhai............ its nice but i prefer commenting with some beautiful words to add more flavors to your poetry !!!!!!!

Hamen chaman ne hamesha sayaad he maana
Ye jantay hain k, jachtay nahi hain kaliyon main
Chand bikhri huvee yaadon ka sahaara lay kar
Laut aain gay, kisi roze inhee galiyon main

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Thanks BM :hug: ur sharing poetry is also really cool

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bht nyc sannan

keep it up

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samaj nahi aya :confused:
main b akk shair kahoon ?

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sure mountains shoot !!!!!!!

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:lajawab:

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nice BM n Sannan

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its heart touching..