ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

here is my second sharing with u ppl hope u like it :slight_smile:

**aag ho to jalane mein der kitni lagti hai
barf ke pighalane mein der kitni lagti hai

chaahe koi ruk jaaye chaahe koi rah jaaye
qaafilon ko chalane mein der kitni lagti hai

chaahe koi jaisa bhi humsafar ho sadiyon se
raastaa badalane mein der kitni lagti hai

yeh to vaqt ke bas mein hai ke kitni mohalat de
varnaa baKht Dikhane mein der kitni lagti hai

mom kaa badan lekar dhoop mein nikal aana
aur phir pighalane mein der kitni lagti hai

soch kii zaminon mein raaste judaa hon to
duur jaa nikalane mein der kitni lagti hai:) **

Re: ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

^ ^ ^

waah..bahut..achhe..

this poetry symbolically reminds me of a Hindi poem by Dushyant Kumar..in which one line says

" Yeh Soch kar ke darakhto mein chaav hotee hai, yehaan babool ke saaye mein aake baith gaye"!!

Re: ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

wah i didn't know that i just read this on a site and like it :)
ne ways thanks for liking it :)

Re: ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

nice 1

Re: ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

thanks :)

Re: ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

bohat garam thi ghazal thandi kar k pari hay:teary1:

nice

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Nice :-)

Re: ek garama garam ghazal meri taraf se!!!

i hope u didn’t burn your self:p
ne ways thanks :slight_smile: